I know the title is too long and a little strange, therefor it's up for change.

I have recently finished writing a script, it's only the first draft and I haven't revised it yet. I'm posting this now because I want help from you guys to read it and tell me what you think could be done better. So if you're interested, please read it over and give your input.

If you're interested in reading it, just say so and I'll send you a PM with the link. (I hope that's efficient enough?)

Thanks guys.