@Dyland, So basically I can sorta write, but the editing is too quick and doesn't complement the script like it could have?
Thanks, and I'll see if I can't slow down shots and things next time.

@Jstudios, I'm liking that middle paragraph. Seems to clarify exactly why it didn't work. Very insightful.

I think I'm destined to do terribly at sound balancing. That's been an issue for a long time now. I might just have to have others check my films before releasing them publicly.

@Lisaisanut,
Yes. I like reviews. Just PM me when it's uploaded.
Also, I just noticed that your name is not just random letters stuffed together. It's got a "Hidden" message to it.

@Squid, True that, it doesn't quite fit. But in the end it was just too cool to cut. And I'm glad you liked the complementary tilted angles.

@Spider, Thanks!