I've seen this on youtube before, and it was pretty good! The animation was decent, but it could use some more fluency. Maybe try raising your framerate, and taking more frames. The concept wasn't original, but you executed it well! I found the bleep a bit weird, but that's just me, and it actually was very fitting. Overall, great job, and I hope you can make some good brickfilms!

Also, welcome to Bricksinmotion!