Eh it was OK. i have many suggestions you need to keep the camera still and try to eliminate reflections i saw many in the window try wearing a black T-shirt while you animate it also reduces light flicker which you need to use lamps covered in paper to defuse the light (i have no idea what you do now so i'm stating this stuff) the focus changes a lot make sure your camera is on all manual settings especially the focus another thing is the things where too choppy but that will come with time as long as you remember to ease in and out also one thing i don't like is clay blood it just doesn't look good now i do lots of shootouts and i found the best thing to use for blood is red food coloring mixed with school glue it looks real and once it dries it will peel right off sometimes i like to add a little clay to give the impression of a bullet hole and some gore (depending on what you are going for) now i can tell you have potential i did like the muzzle flashes too and the fight choreography was pretty good i quite enjoyed that

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Also seeing your new here welcome aboard! you are sure to pick up some good techniques while you are here!

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