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The Beast and the Farmer (BRAWL 2013)

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When a man has lost all hope, only the strangest of beings can help rekindle his spirits.

Last edited by Sonjira (August 3, 2013 (07:02pm))

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Re: The Beast and the Farmer (BRAWL 2013)

It's really good.

I think I like it better than the other film idea you had.  The amount you animated is quite impressive.

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Thanks, Squid! Ya, with my original idea, I just sort of came up with it, and then filled in the theme connection later. So this one does work better.

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Re: The Beast and the Farmer (BRAWL 2013)

You are a beautiful filmmaker and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

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Aw, that was sweet...Wait, did I really just say that???

Anyway, 3:55 is very impressive for BRAWL, and it had a very nice story that was complete, but not rushed.
What is it with the farmer's head? Seems that several BRAWL films have had it already....

The lighting seemed a little bitty-bit on the dark side, but otherwise it looked fine.

It has a nice message, and you did a good job for only having four days.

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Thanks for the comments, Pritchard! I just watched all the other entries, and I noticed the recurring head, as well. It's really strange!

I thought that, for this film, it might be nice to make one that had a message and was more serious, as opposed to my usual odd comedy. I really love doing those kinds of videos, but it's always fun to deviate from the norm! mini/smile

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I was actually considering using that head on Sir Clovis or Sir Scott in Odoriferous. He he he

Re: The Beast and the Farmer (BRAWL 2013)

Enjoyable, but the switching between past and present tenses in the narration bugged me.

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Jargon wrote:

Enjoyable, but the switching between past and present tenses in the narration bugged me.

I realized that when I got to editing. mini/sad If I don't write a script in one sitting, I'll sometimes forget the tense. This is usually fine, as this only happens in the scene descriptions, But since the narrator does that job, well, this happens.

But still, I'm really glad you liked it!

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Re: The Beast and the Farmer (BRAWL 2013)

I must say this one of my favorite entries. Great job.

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Jargon wrote:

Enjoyable, but the switching between past and present tenses in the narration bugged me.

Should I feel embarrassed for not noticing this?

Still, I really enjoyed the short, Sonjira! It was very much in your style, which I always enjoy. mini/smile

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Re: The Beast and the Farmer (BRAWL 2013)

Great moral.  Nicely animated.