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Hyperopia - BRAWL 2013

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168 hours. 2700 frames.
This film was made in 1 week for BRAWL 2013.

And in case you were wondering, hyperopia is the medical term for farsightedness.

Also for your enjoyment, behind the scenes pictures.

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Re: Hyperopia - BRAWL 2013

Wow, that was great. I liked the look of the the film and the first person bits, especially with the phone were great. The only real criticism I have is that the story itself was a little barebones.

Also I loved that eye tester prop.

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"Doctor who?"
That was the second best quote in the thing, the first was:

Spoiler (click to read)

Amputate your head.

It was a nice comical short, and the length was great for a BRAWL film.
The animation is pretty good, and story was nice.
Nothing special or super-complex, but good nonetheless.

The first-person bits were done realistically, and while used often, they never became over-used or repetitive.

While I enjoyed it, there wasn't really anything that really stood-out about your film.
There wasn't anything super special or impressive, but if that's it's biggest flaw, then it's pretty good in my books.

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I really love that camera move that gets really close to the Doctor's face.  I don't think that I'd be able to pull that off.
Good film.

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Pritchard Studios wrote:

"Doctor who?"
That was the second best quote in the thing, the first was:


It was a nice comical short, and the length was great for a BRAWL film.
The animation is pretty good, and story was nice.
Nothing special or super-complex, but good nonetheless.

The first-person bits were done realistically, and while used often, they never became over-used or repetitive.

While I enjoyed it, there wasn't really anything that really stood-out about your film.
There wasn't anything super special or impressive, but if that's it's biggest flaw, then it's pretty good in my books.

I agree With Pritchard.

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Re: Hyperopia - BRAWL 2013

Thanks a lot! This was a fun film to make, and I'm glad I could enter the contest this year.

jstudios wrote:

Also I loved that eye tester prop

Haha, thanks. That thing was fun to build and make, and to animate it moving. But, because of the torso I used for Jerry, I couldn't move Jerry's arms without moving the whole thing. That was a bit of a challenge.

Squid wrote:

I really love that camera move that gets really close to the Doctor's face.  I don't think that I'd be able to pull that off.
Good film.

Thank you!

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Here are a few behind the scenes pictures. Not much, I just snapped a couple photos with my sister's camera when I though about it/had the chance.

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I really liked this film MW. You've drastically improved. The animation is good, and the sets are much more detailed. Great work!

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