Topic: The Lonely Monster
The Lonely Monster
A monster is lonely, and sets off to find someone to be his friend.
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The Lonely Monster
A monster is lonely, and sets off to find someone to be his friend.
Might I start off by saying that the set was amazing! Truly amazing! I liked the sound editing too! My only real suggestion would be to maybe have added some monster gibberish noises. I am guessing that there was not any talking for a reason, but if the monster was given some sighs, moans and cry noises, it might of helped.
Yea I was trying to keep the monsters quiet, and have as little noise as possible. But thanks for the suggestion
To add to the above, I too think that you've got a great set.
Some of the cuts were a bit too quick, and the colors looked odd.
I don't know if it was just the lighting, or if the contrast had something to do with it, but you may want to look into fixing that. The animation was jerky/choppy at times, but the concept was well executed.
Good job.
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