Topic: RENO: Operation 47 [Short Action Film] HD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhbflSE88iw
When a security division agent turns against the FIRM and sells vital codes to the enemy, Zeus turns to the only man he can trust, RENO. But when he is held and interrogated for information, can he handle it? A homage to 80's action flicks. Would appreciate ANY and ALL comments you might have.
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Re: RENO: Operation 47 [Short Action Film] HD

Bump! Alright, I am in the early stages of planning a final RENO film and I need some help. I would really appreciate any feedback you might have. (Critical and constructive.)

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Re: RENO: Operation 47 [Short Action Film] HD

It was surprisingly good, of course I wasn't expecting anything less from you mini/smile
What I Liked - The sounds and music, the camera angles, the location and set, the acting was good, and I also liked the outro because that was great.
What I didn't care for too much because there is nothing I didn't like - The footsteps in the scene where the 2 people are walking are a little to loud and are louder than the voices.
That's it good work

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Re: RENO: Operation 47 [Short Action Film] HD

Caveman Incorporated wrote:

It was surprisingly good, of course I wasn't expecting anything less from you mini/smile
What I Liked - The sounds and music, the camera angles, the location and set, the acting was good, and I also liked the outro because that was great.
What I didn't care for too much because there is nothing I didn't like - The footsteps in the scene where the 2 people are walking are a little to loud and are louder than the voices.
That's it good work

Good advice on the audio, I have learned more about that area of editing in the last few months. Appreciate it!

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