I'd say this is your best film. The story is pretty original, and there wasn't much light flicker. But it surprises me that you've been doing this hobby for a few years now, and it doesn't seem like you've improved greatly. I highly suggest getting a webcam. It will SAVE YOUR LIFE. No joke. I also have noticed that you keep saying "sorry, I'll fix that," but it never seems like you put much effort into actually fixing it. I would enjoy your films so much more if you just got a webcam, or some other camera that can hook up to the computer.