Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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My entry to ZachFB's Contest. It was kinda rushed due to having busy weekends and not getting enough time to come up with an idea. But It was fun making this and I thought it was an pretty good original Idea.
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The only thing I didn't like was the watermark logo. The writing and timing were excellent.
This was decent, but I'm going say what flaws I had with this film down below:
Story: 7/10: The story was very good, probably the best aspect of the film. No real comments there.
Animation: 4.5/10: Could use some work (You should try easing in and out), but okay regarding your circumstances.
Voices: 3/10: They seemed overly dramatic, and kind of rushed to get to the point. It also didn't flow very well.
Writing: 5/10: It suffers from being too quick. A story such as this should have been provided with a longer film, but again, regarding your circumstances, I can see why it wasn't.
Effects: 2/10: I couldn't really see the rain, and the watermark was rather annoying.
Cinematography: 6/10: Pretty good, other than a few bumpy shots and a couple out of focus pictures.
Music & Other Audio: 7/10: This was another strong aspect of the film, as the noises and music complemented the film nicely.
Overall: 5/10
@Juggernaut Pictures thanks, I agree. One thing I usually don't have a problem with the rain effect. But for some reason it didn't composite very well
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