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Back To The Hospital

Back To The Hospital

A short brick film I created in a few hours! I originally had a different Idea in mind, but this was alot funnier in my opinion. Longer animations are coming soon so stay tuned.

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I'm going to post my thoughts here, not Youtube. This was good, but as usual, there was some light.... ok I'll shut up. Aside from that, I feel like your films use the same exact set every time. It gets annoying when I watch your films, and all I usually see is a tree or two, one red car, and one wall. Try thinking of ways to add more variety between sets/scenes. The last thing I'd like to say is about your storyline. I really didn't find it too funny, because the pacing was off, and the voice acting seemed very flat. Voice actors can really help when it comes to character development, as well as make your film more interesting. I do admire your walk cycle, and I like how you designed it yourself. Like I said, I may use that tutorial sometime! So, in short, your films can become a lot more entertaining with different actors, not just yourself!(Changing the pitch of your voice works too, but it isn't the best choice) That's all about the film! Keep up the hard work!

P.S. Lego Batman Gone coming along? Or have you not started yet?

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It says on YT that you removed the video...

https://vimeo.com/channels/holdingourown      http://holding-our-own.tumblr.com

"None practice tolerance less frequently than those who most loudly preach it."

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@HoldingOurOwn - Yes I actually did remove the video on YouTube. I really rushed it and in my opinion it was the worst work I've ever done. I normally take a week to do an animation, so I'm sticking to that.