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Bricks in Motion
Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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Not bad, but could use some work.
Lego CGI animations are kinda hard to review, but some things did stand out in this one.
First, the movements just didn't flow into each other very well, especially at the start. The guy walked up, then rocked back and forth, then leaned over, then turned his head, for example.
The walk cycle looked pretty unnatural, so I suggest you take a look both at the cutscenes from the Lego videogames, and this guy. Lechnology is pretty much the authority on CGI animations/effects around here, and he has gone through years of trial and error to achieve his distinctive look.
Those two problems are pretty much it, and you did a fair job.
Thank you for the nice things, also, thank you for the criticism as well. Literally everything you said has been killing me since I saw the final render. (That took two days of render time to complete.):| It's nice to see my own personal criticisms validated so I can improve. I have big plans for my next one BIG PLANS! 
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