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Bricks in Motion
Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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Hmm... well the animation was quite choppy and editing was rather chaotic (you should consider storyboarding), I did like some of the shots and some movements were cool but there were plenty of camera and set bumps which is never good, it can be masked by overdoing camera shake effect though. Soundtrack seemed kinda unsuitable for the film, the volume was kept at the same level all the time and that made it look like an animation reel. It's definitely not your best video and you can do so much more 
Great job! Can I suggest taking more frames? (on second thought, ignore that, that's just my high standard)
I think you need to use face-paced editing to increase the overall speed of the video, 'cause at the moment it seems like it's too slow for what you wanted it to be. I'd recommend what Larry said and storyboard.
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