Kees, you have definitely stepped up your game with this film! Your technical skills have greatly improved since The Orb of Prosperity. Those camera movements were really nice, especially that opening dolly down shot. Also, the shot where the camera zooms in on the photo of his wife to transition to his memories was really well done. Smooth and flawless. The concept was interesting and original so I applaud you for that. The fact that the film is so open to interpretation is great. I'm glad you didn't force any one meaning at the audience.
There were a few things about this film that I didn't like however. First of all would be the audio. While the music was great and fit well with the film, I feel as if some subtle sound effects throughout the film would have greatly improved the overall impact of the piece. The second aspect that detracted from the film was the title card. It seemed unprofessional and didn't blend well with the film. If it had have been placed more subtly as an overlay in the actual video it would have worked better I believe (more like how your BiM thumbnail looks). Alternatively, no title card would have worked better I think. Obviously there are minor animation errors or areas that could use small improvements, but they didn't take away from the film really.
I really enjoyed the "little" details interjected throughout the film. For example, when the shelf falls and that little 1x1 plate flies up in the air. Little touches like that are always nice. Also, the montage of the creation was well done. Overall this is a good accomplishment which shows a lot of improvement from your last film! Looking forward to seeing more from you! You keep getting better and better, keep up the nice work. ![mini/smile](https://bricksinmotion.com/forums/img/smilies/mini/smile.gif)