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Impossible Mission: Dark Deals
Secret agents Ethan Reid and Benji MacWallace plot their perfect plan, but they face perilous pitfalls. Will it work?
Last edited by RedBrick1 (December 26, 2012 (02:41pm))
Good job! 
Already knowing the entire script kinda ruined the twist, but it was funny nevertheless.
(Speaking of that, I think the "Black Friday" version of the last line would have been slightly better, but it's a little late to change that now.)
The only issue I saw was the attempt to hide a camera bump at 0:09. (I assume that's what happened since there was just the one short camera tilt in the middle of an other-wise still scene.)
One more little nit-pick: Would you mind moving the above picture to the bottom of the post? Right now, it's awkwardly splitting up the text. 
@Pritchard Studios, Thanks! And and I really appreciate you voicing. Yeah, I should have done something different with that shot
. I really wanted to get this up BEFORE Black Friday so that line would fit better, but I didn't get around to it.
And I moved the picture then. 
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