Uhh... First off I have to say I had no idea what was going on. Then again I couldn't read the text that was popping up all over and that might have helped with understanding it. About the rest, the animation was really choppy, with the characters jerking around a lot as they moved. The props were bumped around quite a bit, too. There was also a decent amount of light and focus flicker, bumpy camera, and set bumps.

It would be a really good idea to tape down your camera and set, to reduce the bumps. And using full manual focus and lighting settings (Exposure, Gain, etc.) is essential to keep away the light flicker. What camera and, if you use one, animation program, do you use?

Hope this helps!