Topic: Illusion

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Illusion

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A short trailer about a soldier who had to come back from war, but can't forget what happened to him and his friends.

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Re: Illusion

Very good job!
The animation was smooth. (Mostly, but more on that later.) The effects were generally well done, and the story was told very well. It had a good balance between telling the story, and having that "Trailer" feel. I had the feeling of seeing his story play out with the highlights, but it felt like there was a lot more to it, and that it was part of a larger, more in-depth story.

There was a little bit of light-flicker, a few camera bumps, and the bomb at 1:48 didn't mesh well with the rest of the shot.

Spoiler (click to read)

(But that could be another way to show that it's not really a bomb.)

But the animation was inconsistent. In the first shots it was very smooth, and had that "extra frames added in post" look. (That's not necessarily a bad thing.) But then from 1:42 on it looked like normal, unaltered animation, and of a much lower quality. It was kinda jarring when it switched, and took me out of the movie for a sec, but truthfully it would have taken a lot more than that to ruin this brickfilm.

4.17/5

Last edited by Pritchard Studios (October 2, 2012 (10:38am))