Topic: Order 66: Shadows Over Celios V PART II - Battle of Parath
Hey can someone give me some input on my script so far:
Possetive Feedback is appreciated. :
Here is the script (unfinished):
Lego Star Wars Order 66: Battle of Parath script
(Jyke and Yirra and the pilot head toward a small clone base.)
(As they enter the base they see a orange clone Lt. sitting at a monitor, entering in codes into a databank.)
Lt. Blaze:
Greetings, I'm Lt. Blaze. Forgive my surprise, but it has been many months since I have seen either another trooper or a jedi.
Jyke:
Why?
Lt. Blaze:
Four months ago, I was in this very base, and my commander, Cody, was here for a routine inspection of this base. Soon after his arrival, the base was ambushed by a droid battalion.
During the battle, I was in this control room and the door was suddenly blocked off by falling debris, trapping me inside. After the battle, the squad left me; thinking I was dead. After I cleared away the debris, I began repairing the base, and have lived here ever since.
(He pauses before continuing)
Why have you come here?
Yirra:
When Order 66 was given, my squad attacked and betrayed me. Fortunately Commander Jyke rescued me. We escaped from my squad, and decided to come here to seek refuge. Commander Dirk and his squad are probably searching for us now!
Lt. Blaze:
You are welcome to stay here with me as long as you'd like. Forever if you need to.
Jyke:
Thank you for your kindness Lt.!
Pilot:
I must be going now Jyke.
Jyke: Ok, bye!
(The pilot exits the base and then activates his comlink.)
Pilot:
Sargent, they are inside the clone base in the Plains of Parath.
Sargent Sanderve:
Thank you Captain. We're on our way!
(The next day Yirra woke up to see a battalion of imperal stormtroopers in battle formation.)
Yirra:
Everyone WAKE UP!
Jyke:
What! What's wrong?
Yirra:
Dirk and his forces have found us. We must prepare for battle!
Lt. Blaze:
You heard the general! All men in your battle formations!
Trooper #1:
What!
Trooper #2
But sir, there are only ten of us vs 100's of troopers.
Lt. Blaze:
Don't loose hope men, we must fight to the death!
Heavy Trooper 'Surge':
Commander they have a ray shield. Without destroying it, we won't be able to penatrate through their forces!
Jyke: Then we must wait. Tonight we will set explosives around the shield generator and towers and destroy them.
Lt. Blaze:
Yirra, and I will stay here at the base, while the six of you complete the mission.
Jyke:
Ok!
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Two speeders left the base and headed toward the imperial camp. On arriving at the camp they see two guards and a security droid at the entrance to the camp.)
Trooper #2:
There are guards! How are we supposed to enter the camp, to access the shield generator?
Jyke:
Attach these to the tip(s) of your gun(s). {Jyke said holding out a small round tube} They will allow your guns to not make as much noise.
(Jyke attached the blaster silencer to the front of his blaster and fired a blaster bolt at the guard.)
Trooper#1
Ok now that the guards are defeated, we can enter the camp and destroy the energy shield generator.
Surge:
Trooper# 0721 and Kreth you take the left two towers. Trooper# 7716 and Finn you take the right two towers. Commander Jyke and I will take the center main generator. We will all meet back hear at the speeder. (pauses) If anything goes wrong message me.
Trooper #2
Alright, let's go!
(Trooper #1 and Kresh scale the tower and attach two charges to the energy cupeling.)
(Trooper #2 and Finn scale the tower and attach two charges to the energy cupeling. An energy drill falls of the ledge of the tower and hits a guards helmet.)
Guard #1:
What the...!
Guard #2:
What! What is it...!
Guard #1:
It's an energy drill. I think it came from up there.
(Guard #1 points and looks up towards the tower.)
Guard #1 to Guard #2:
Shine your light up there I thought I saw something move.
(Finn and Trooper C-7716 stare down at the guards from the shadows of the tower, as one of the guards begins to shine a light up at the tower.)
Guard #1 to Finn:
Hey you up there! What are you doing?
Finn:
I'm an engineer and I came to repair a loose energy cable. I was sent by Dirk.
Guard #2:
Dirk didn't send you! You're a traitor and a spy.
Guard #2 to Guard #1:
Kill them!
(The guards started firing blaster bolts at Finn, but Trooper C-7716 returned fire and shot down both guards.)
(Trooper C-7716 ignites his jetpack and they fly off.)
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Thanks,
~ scproductions2911 ~
Last edited by BrickPaladin (April 19, 2012 (07:48am))
