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This is entry for HOViNET's or Palikkatakomo's contest in Finland.
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I'm little disapointed for this little short for entry, but I think it's alright. I have now three votes, so pretty good. 
Last edited by Lord Lajaka (February 15, 2012 (11:35am))
Not bad on the animating! The walk cycle was good and smooth! There was hardly an light flicker. I would try to cut down on some of the choppy spots like where he goes to open the cell door and where he is picking up the weapons (as you can see the weapons on the table shaking). 
Yup, it was hard. I can't do much for hardly light flicking, but I don't care. I think it's good enough.
Last edited by Lord Lajaka (February 15, 2012 (11:39am))
Why this is in darkness. Why anyone don't comment. Just Repelling Spider. Please, comment and watch, I want to hear critic or support.
Sorry for not doing this earlier, although Spider pretty much sums it all up.
Pros:
Smooth animation!
The story was told very well without any major talking. (But it should have been left out, or expanded.)
Cons:
Some of the props were bumped a lot, the guy speaking seemed out of place. (The movie appeared to have been made without any speaking parts, but then those lines were thrown in to clear up what was going on.) And the blood effect didn't look that great to me. (I don't really like blood in brickfilms, so this may be bias. But it's kinda like mouth animation, unless it's done really well, it looks really bad.)
I think it was made very well, keep up the good work.
Thank you very much. I will try to learn of your critic.
I won the contest! Yeah, I'm happy now.
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