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It looks pretty good, RobBrick. The hand on the right is a nice touch. But I don't really like the white reflections all over the image; they're kind of distracting.

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The image is nice, RobBrick, but the teaxt it's not where it shuold be. You shouldn't put it in the corner. In the center, up or down, or maybe slightly uncentered, but not in the corners. It looks weird. You could put the title between the gun and the hand on the right.

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I like it RobBrick, however I feel like the image is too cluttered. For the size of it we see very little stuff, and a lot of wide open space. I'd advise using a black expanse, and put the figures closer together, like Sfugity did.

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I like it, though the font of the titles I think are not that scary - they're too normal. Though I also like the fact that I went from left to right on the image, and that I looked at the title as last, and kind a made think there for a minute like "WOW!" - by other meanings, I like the title. mini/tongue

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Currently writing my script, and as it is a non-dialogue film, I'm also completing my English Homework by doing it.

Killing two birds with one stone.

EDIT - I'm going to release a poster for my film soon.

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My film is about the basement. Because everyone knows, basements, are scary. mini/eek

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Eddie wrote:

My film is about the basement. Because everyone knows, basements, are scary. mini/eek

Basement dwellers...Even more scary mini/lol . But that does sound like an interesting idea eddie.

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I finally got an idea. Script time!

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JaredSM wrote:
Eddie wrote:

My film is about the basement. Because everyone knows, basements, are scary. mini/eek

Basement dwellers...Even more scary mini/lol . But that does sound like an interesting idea eddie.

I am a basement dweller. Does that make me scary?

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Just thought of a great transition between two scenes in my bed...last NIGHT! I really wish I could dream my film......and write it down the next morning. Unless I start panicking when I get up because it will be soooooo scary! At least I hope it'll be. mini/shifty

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Mine's enitled "Demon". Almost done with the script. I've gotta pace myself working on this, unlike ToY. mini/sweat

Also, Onion, I say we either have a trailer contest or a poster contest. Agree?

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Poster contest sounds nice, but I don't think it's really necessary. Same for trailer contest.
I think I am going to make a poster, but I'm not sure anymore wether I will be able to finish the movie on time (really hope I will).

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MPfist0 wrote:

Poster contest sounds nice, but I don't think it's really necessary. Same for trailer contest.
I think I am going to make a poster, but I'm not sure anymore wether I will be able to finish the movie on time (really hope I will).

I know it's not necessary, but I think it would be fun to do.

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I think we should have a trailer contest. That would be fun mini/smile

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It would be pretty interesting. It would be cool to see how good you guys are at making thrilling/scary trailers for your films.

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I wouldn't mind a trailer contest. That'd be interesting.

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That would be pretty interesting. Thought it would be a bit of a problem for me, skince I have a lot of work on my entry. mini/confused

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I'm in favour of a trailer contest.

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A trailer contest would be cool, but I don't particularly mind if we do or not.

Also, new signature for my entry!

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