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BRAWL 2011: Steve-TMS

BRUHLL FILM
OH it looks like youtube has made the quality terrible, thanks.This....has got to be the weirdest and longest (I made it in a week, that shows how hard I worked on my OTHER films) film I have ever made... I have no idea where I thought of this and it's ridiculously stupid, but what the heck. I tried going for a JustKidden "styled" animation at points and I think the film turned out alright overall. I'd like to say thanks to all the people who supported me and all the voice actors. mini/smile
EDIT: Special thanks to JustKidden, Onion and RealBrick for supporting me.

Last edited by jstudios (August 15, 2011 (06:17am))

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That was the funniest BRAWL entry I've seen so far, the girl wish made me very LOL. The animation was good and comedic timing was well done at times

4/5

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Nicely done, loved the girl thing like Darkman said. The animation fitted the style of the film perfectly. 4/5

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Hahahahahahaha xD
I enjoyed it, the animation was very nice, and I especially enjoy the fact that Onion beat up some guys with a shovel.
I dislike that you used a bad word mini/blankexpression but oh well.

Steve was funny, I loved how the guy always wanted to call him Samuel. xD
Impressive for a film done in a week.

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Super enjoyable film. It made me lol quite a few times, and I LOVED Steve's voice acting! Whoever voiced him is fantastic!

-JK

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That was a wonderful film. I am amazed and surprised you got it done in a week. The dialog was witty, the animation smooth & cartoony, and voice acting realistic. I am very happy to have been a part of this, and cannot wait to see more from you you in the future.

5/5

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Just Kidden wrote:

Super enjoyable film. It made me lol quite a few times, and I LOVED Steve's voice acting! Whoever voiced him is fantastic!

-JK

Yah, he's like super duper special awesome. mini/XD
Anyway, thanks guys, and I'm glad you like the girl wish joke. Oh, and thanks to Onion for finding me some great sound effects.
And Darkman YOU CAN'T MEAN THAT. :')

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Where did you get your sound effects? Some of the ones in this short I've been looking for for a very long time.

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Amazing film. I laughed, I cried, it moved me.

Great job on this, jstudios! The ending though...ehh.
4.7/5

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Yeah, I had no idea what to actually do for the ending until it was almost time to get finished. There was originally going to be a different ending, but I needed JK to shout his lines and it was midnigh when I asked him to.

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Personally the ending worked well. Haha, I remember that discussion. Great film, I'm on my 8th viewing (srsly).

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The only thing I would change about the ending is having them make out.

mini/tongue

-JK

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Dude, do you know how HARD it would be to animate that? mini/XD

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BUMP

Anyone more comments guys? This is really awesome, it deserves more feedback.

EDIT: I'm reviewing this on BiM - The Latest & Greatest.

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Daw, you flatter me too muh. mini/cat I showed this to my parents and they liked it (which was strange), they laughed quite loud at the girl wish too (which was even MORE strange) mini/confused .

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jstudios wrote:

I showed this to my parents and they liked it (which was strange)

Nope, they just have good taste. mini/smile

Though, the girl dying actually seemed to not fit in for me, as this seems like a cartoon styled thing where people can turn their heads around as much as they want, he he.

I still thought it was funny. xD (which is creepy, but oh well)

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Haha, just saw this. Good animation, I especially loved the part with the girl. Glad I could voice act!

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AnnoyingNoisesProductions wrote:

Nope, they just have good taste. mini/smile

Though, the girl dying actually seemed to not fit in for me, as this seems like a cartoon styled thing where people can turn their heads around as much as they want, he he.

I still thought it was funny. xD (which is creepy, but oh well)

I sort of made it unclear whether she dies or not (though she probably did...) but I tried to do it in a cartoony fashion. Like say, when a minifigure gets eaten by a squid or gets his head blown off, I tried to do it in a cartooney fashion. mini/tongue
Oh and thanks for voice acting WelcometoAwesomeness.

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