Topic: In tha Brain / Im Hirn

I just wanted to ask you what you think of my new idea, or if you can improve or add anything.
I'm still scripting but I'll tell you the main idea.

A man who falls down a staircase. He wakes up in a room which is the center of his brain.
I thought of a red room with many doors like the control room, memories, education, etc.
There he finds a Tourist guide^^ who shows him the place (some memories n stuff).
Well I'm not sure to this place, what happens maybe you can help?

Thanks! mini/smile

Re: In tha Brain / Im Hirn

I think its an awesome idea i wouldn't change it.

Re: In tha Brain / Im Hirn

Sounds a bit cliché to me.

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Re: In tha Brain / Im Hirn

Very interesting concept, but to make it an interesting story there needs to be two things: 1) a goal for the protagonist to be trying to accomplish, and 2) something or someone preventing him from accomplishing that goal. But based on your concept, I don't have a clue what those things could be.

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Re: In tha Brain / Im Hirn

Well his goal could be to heal or 'repair' his head injury. And germs or some other kind of body sick can try to prevent him from doing it. Hope that helps!

-LMP

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