I'm a sucker for a good pun, and the title was no exception. This is the first ToY entry I've watched, so you did a decent job at getting my attention.
There were a few problems with light flicker and the cinematography was kind of awkward throughout, as if you hadn't spent a whole lot of time actually framing and setting up the shots. Some of the effects looked kind of strange too, it wasn't hard to tell you had animated the plane flying in post.
It was an interesting film, although it felt like it skated over a lot of the details. I didn't know a whole lot about the process the Wright brothers went through before, and I still don't having watched it. I understand it was a fictionalised interpretation, but it felt like in one shot they were in their workshop, and in the next they were trying to fly a plane without any real exposition explaining why they were tryig to create an aircraft.
Well done, it was really good and had a nice charm about it. I hope to see more from you in the future.