Topic: LEGO PPL 2

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I'm sorry, I couldn't finish watching. The audio was WAY TOO QUIET. I could only hear you for the most part. One of your voice actors had bad background noise, and it was near impossible to hear him. Animation was pretty good, but was basically the only good part of your film. For future references, you'll probably want to amplify your lines, and your voice actors' lines in audacity mini/smile.

Story 3
Animation 5
Cinematography 4
Sound 2
Overall 3
All ratings out of 10

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It was pretty good, but I don't like fowl language and it was frequent in your film, so I give it a 4/10 for that. mini/wink

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Lol this is why i don't use bricksinmotion.

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SithSerenity wrote:

Lol this is why i don't use bricksinmotion.

Is it because of no praise? If you really don't want to, don't use BIM.

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SithSerenity wrote:

Lol this is why i don't use bricksinmotion.

Why, because we try to help you improve? When we say something was bad about your film we usually tell you a way you can fix it. Even if we don't tell you how to fix it, when we tell you something negetive about your film you should try to fix it and improve instead of just complaining about people's complaints and just doing the same thing with your next film. You shouldn't think of criticism as a bad thing.

Of course you could just be talking about the complaints about the cursing. If that's the case, I don't have anything to say. mini/tongue

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Like JK said. We're here to help and tell you what to fix, not to insult. If you can't take criticism then this really isn't the site for you.

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SithSerenity wrote:

Lol this is why i don't use bricksinmotion.


Because this is the place where people ACTUALLY criticise you? and you dont remove their comments? Okay. Criticism is normally to help improve so you know whats wrong so you may correct it next time, but apparently now its all about continuos praise.

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It's not YouTube here.
You get real criticism instead of "lol" "cool" "epic"
And back to the film:
I liked the animation, the censore of the cuss words really didn't hide anything so I didn't really like that. mini/tongue Of course, the humor was good, maybe a background or green screen would be cool. I do hope to see a LEGO PPL 3 mini/bigsmile

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Fireguy789 wrote:

Because this is the place where people ACTUALLY criticise you? and you dont remove their comments? Okay. Criticism is normally to help improve so you know whats wrong so you may correct it next time, but apparently now its all about continuos praise.

Exactly. He blocked me before, because I tried to help his film. He prefers comments like, "COOL, OLOL." Which is fine, but he gets different when he's here. I don't want to get this too off topic, so I am going to suggest what other members have suggested...Make a longer film, with more story. All you've basically been doing since the last year is just doing stuff like, "Lego-Murdered," "Lego-Shot," "Lego-Saber." One or two of those is enough. Like I said earlier, this film isn't horrible, you've definitely got some pretty good animation, but you're wasting it. Try out a nice five minute movie that takes a couple of months to make, then you'll gain more respect from BIM. Good animation, and bad story, and voices was basically what we got out of this.

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Lol Fireguy789...I never remove comments. I might have once or twice but I just don't get any bad comments on Youtube. I guess I should appreciate the people who give me criticism so I can improve...I'm just so used to 100% positive feedback from Youtube I forgot that I'm really not that good at making videos. Oh well.

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Hey guys wtf is the + and - thing under your names?

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Please use our criticism, you definitely have a lot of potential, if you use your skills, instead of making twenty-second shorts, or random ADSF videos.

sithserenity wrote:

Hey guys, what are those plus and minus things.

They are the ways to give feedback on posts, minus means that users didn't like it, plus means users liked it. For example you get a +3, three people have gave you a "+", and like your post.

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So my first post got -11 likes...I feel hated.

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SithSerenity wrote:

So my first post got -11 likes...I feel hated.

No your first post got a -1, the post going against BIM got a -11. Look, none of this recent chat on this thread has anything to do with your film. Please try to stay on topic.

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SithSerenity wrote:

Lol Fireguy789...I never remove comments. I might have once or twice but I just don't get any bad comments on Youtube. I guess I should appreciate the people who give me criticism so I can improve...I'm just so used to 100% positive feedback from Youtube I forgot that I'm really not that good at making videos. Oh well.

Well, animation-wise your great, but I still cant stress the fact enough that if you made slightly longer, more well thought out films like you used to instead of lack-luster 2 second long shorts every 2 days, you would be A LOT better. A well thought out comedy film with some good jokes can make up for a million of those usually obnoxious and unoriginal (no offence) shorts.

Also, I know you remove comments because I notice when the ones that dont say "COOL, EPIC, LOL" disappear mini/tongue

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fireguy789 wrote:

Well, animation-wise your great, but I still cant stress the fact enough that if you made slightly longer, more well thought out films like you used to instead of lack-luster 2 second long shorts every 2 days, you would be A LOT better. A well thought out comedy film WITH SOME GOOD JOKES can make up for a million of those usually obnoxious and unoriginal (no offence) shorts.

THIS.

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I'm already working on a mid-evil video that is "ToY" inspired. Maybe you guys will like it, I don't know. I admit I am sort of a sell out since I became partner but that will change.

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SithSerenity wrote:

I'm already working on a mid-evil video that is "ToY" inspired. Maybe you guys will like it, I don't know. I admit I am sort of a sell out since I became partner but that will change.


Good, theres hope for you yet mini/smile
Partnership is cool and all, but just dont let partnership get in the way of quality videos, because technically, if you make one, really well done long video that a lot of people watch, you will make tons more money off that one video then you will of quite a few of those shorts put together. So its still a win win situation to strive for a good, well thought out, longer film.

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I recommend you don't use bad words in your films if you want to be better.
Lots of people don't enjoy them, and it sometimes seriously bothers them.
And no one is ever going to complain if your films are completely clean.