Not your best film, but the fight was cool

Story: 4/10
Cinematography: 5/10
Sound: 6/10
Animation: 6/10
Effects: 4/10
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Overall: 5/10

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Thought I'd patch together a mixture between a review and some advise.

Personally, I think you, as a brickfilmer, have a lot of potential. You have good camera quality and smooth animation, however you lack the ability to tell a story. After watching a numerous amount of your videos I can clearly see you go for a quick action/comedy short, releasing them once to twice a week. For a once off this is fine, however I've quickly grown bored with seeing these. My advise to you would be spend more time on a film, and try and mix up the story a little.

As far as the video goes I think the animation was pretty nice, and the fight scene was fairly good. I'd advise doing a little more ease-in ease-out animation thought to make it more realistic.

4/10

EDIT: Just changed the rating real quick.

Last edited by Onion (July 10, 2011 (11:25am))