Topic: Rebuilding Society
Rebuilding Society
Not much of a backstory just-
"A lone solider attempts to defeat a squad."
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Rebuilding Society
Not much of a backstory just-
"A lone solider attempts to defeat a squad."
Right from the beginning, I had not a clue what was going on, the story could be better, I didn't know what was up with the music. The animation was good. 2/5
Last edited by LASF (June 26, 2011 (06:29am))
Thanks for the honest review.
So, as for getting better, I should chose better music and have a better storyline, right? 
That sounds good. For good music, go to incompetech.com
I got it from there... 
Really? Well, that's weird. Hmmm.. I have another idea, turn the volume down, I jumped from my chair when I heard how loud it was. That's the real prob. Good luck! Can't wait to see your next one!
Thanks
Not TOO bad, actually okay, your "skills" aren't awful, you have some basic concepts done okay. Practice makes perfect! I would try making it a little easiser to follow, I couldn't tell exactly what happened at first, but when it got to the lone soldier it began to make alot more sense.
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