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Topic: Set Critique/Opinions

This is my battlefield set I built for a scene i'm planning to start shooting soon.

I need opinions on what looks good, what doesn't, what needs to be added, etc.

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Re: Set Critique/Opinions

It looks rather simple, and also it seems that everything is too carefully placed.

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Re: Set Critique/Opinions

Also, it'd be helpful if you took pictures from the angles you plan to film at.
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Re: Set Critique/Opinions

Um mabye try to make those walls and stuff out of lego

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Re: Set Critique/Opinions

Sandbags,the cannon,and the tank traps I mean

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Re: Set Critique/Opinions

Y'know, you could have put it in this thread.

I really liked the set. Nice and simple.

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Re: Set Critique/Opinions

I would suggest making those gray walls look more natural, as in making the holes more curved and ragged like they got hit with a cannon.

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