Topic: "The Weird Dream" Inncomplete script
Hey guys.
I recently just came up with an idea for a new film.
Here is a rough script that I just came up with:
Timmy --- A 12 Year old boy
Deadeye--- A Clone Private
Jeff --- Timmy's Best freind
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It was a friday night; Timmy went to have a sleep over at Jeff's house.
Timmy and Jim played Xbox together until they got tired.
After hours of Xbox, Timmy and Jim got into their sleeping bags and fell asleep.
Timmy soon found himself at the Star Wars planet of Kashyyyk. He was inside his own dream.
Timmy is behind a small baricade of logs with many other clone troopers, he sees droids shooting near him.
Each few seconds somebody gets shot, jimmy starts to panic.
Timmy Yells: "Whats happening!!"
Clone Commander: "What do you mean, your in war!!
The Clone Commander looks at Timmy and says "Wheres your blaster"
Jimmy: "What Blaster?"
The clone commander hands Timmy a DC-15 Blaster.
A bomb exploads near Timmy.
The clone commander and Timmy take cover behind the logs with a few other clones.
Timmy: "I'm not supposed to be here!"
Clone Commander: "What do you mean? Your in the 501st platoon, right?
Timmy: The 501st Platoon? I'm not in any platoon, I am not supposed to be here!
Clone Commander: "You mean your a citizen?"
Timmy: "Yes, do i look like a solider to you?"
Clone Commander: "I will have one of my corporals take you to a shelter.
Clone Commander yells: "Hey, Ace! Get over here!"
The Corporal leaves his cover to report to the commander, but he is shot and killed
Clone Commander: "Damn!"
The Clone Commander looks at one of the privates sitting next to him.
Clone Commander: "Deadeye, take this citizen to the shelter, ASAP!"
Deadeye: Me? Yes, sir.
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The rest is incomplete, but I have the ending:
Timmy wakes up and says "Woah. Maybe i shouldn't play xbox before bed anymore"
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This was my first script, so if you guys have feedback, that would be great.
Last edited by Realmotionstudios (July 23, 2009 (06:21pm))