Topic: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

Hey guys,
I decided a few months ago to change my 'company' name to GroundZero Animation instead of 'LegoMasterProductions' mini/rolleyes
Anyway, I've made part of my new intro, the CGI part, and I need some critique as this is my first attempt at CGI. Link.

Please post feedback and suggestions, thanks. mini/wink


-LMP (Or G0, I guess)

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Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

This video is private.

Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

Private video.

Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

Sorry, fixed.

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Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

The camera movement was a bit fast and jittery in some points I think.

Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

And it says "Go".... You need to add Ground Zero at the bottom, so people get it.

Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

Yeah, the camera movements need to be a bit slower, and you need to add Ground Zero below it, so people know what it is, but otherwise it's amazing!

-BGanimations

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Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

Thanks for the feedback guys.

The logo reads 'G0' not 'Go', just to be clear. mini/wink

I do agree with the jittery camera movements, and even though I was going for a more robotic feel, I'll make them softer and slower because it does seem I'll get better results.

I also just finished the 'Ground Zero Animation' model I will add at the bottom, as it does cause confusion to what it stands for.

Thanks for the critique and keep it coming, mini/wink

-LMP

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Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

I suggest that you need to use a tweaker so the camera movements are more smooth, the only thing is... I don't know if that's possible on the program you're working with.

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Re: New Intro (Work-In-Progress)

Did I say that I used Blender?


EDIT: I remade it and added 'GroundZero Animation' at the bottom and made the camera movement a little slower. Link.

Last edited by LMP (August 22, 2009 (05:38am))

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