Topic: A Day on the Job.

This film is mostly concentrated on Alex, as Sam has Swine Flu.

Alex has gotten a job on the Brick City & Western Railroad, (BC&W RR) and today is his first day. Alex's first assignment is to drive a non-revenue (i.e. no passengers) passenger train to Brick City as engineer, with a fireman and a supervisor to score him. It all goes perfectly until he's about 5 miles outside Brick City, where the BC&W's line crosses the EL. (Electrified Line) He gets a red light, and stops, but falls over against the throttle, and the engine advances forward onto the diamond. A collision occurs, but he gets the job anyways. (he triped over the fireman's shovel)
It does need to be revised.
What do you guys think?

Oh, and I have a special song for the end credits, anyone who gets it right gets +5 jelly things.

Re: A Day on the Job.

*Bump*

Re: A Day on the Job.

You bumped a 12-hour-old thread? A twelve-hour-period that took place while most members in the United States were asleep? mini/no

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Re: A Day on the Job.

I was starting to get the feeling no one would view it, so I panicked. Most of the views were me reviewing what I had typed.