I can see the photos but I'll try to fix them. Let me know when you see them.

Update: Should work now.

Last edited by Mosh5256 (June 23, 2015 (06:21pm))

Yep, it works.

It looks good. I like the out of focus lights in the back, and love the lights reflecting in the visor, but the image seems kinda grainy. It may be better to film in brighter light to avoid the grain, then darken it in post production.

Production has been stalled a week because of the ACT, and the passing of my grandfather.

BUT I'M STARTING BACK TODAY! I have been dying to get back to making this film.

What is supposed to be the focal point of this frame? The eye is drawn to the blue thing, but since it's not in focus, it's drawn to the box lid that is in focus directly behind it. Further inspection sows the ninja in focus. If the focus is pulling to show the blue thing in focus after the ninja, that's fine, but as it is, the focus seems way off. Also, the framing is off. Lance is in the corner of the frame, almost cut off, and there's a lot of empty space on the left side.

You should check out the Rule of Thirds for better framing practices. It'll help show that the focal point is supposed to be on the ninja.

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Hopefully this is better. Oh, and the focus does pull to the blue arm.

Finished a scene today! The animation was slightly below my normal level but it looks great. Gotta keep that schedule.

I've never tried making a poster so here it goes. I think it's a nice teaser for my first poster.

The black around the face is not what I would like but I was kinda being hurried. I will fix it at some point.

Last edited by Mosh5256 (July 17, 2015 (05:26pm))

I'm excited for this.

Cant wait, this looks interesting, and that poster looks good.

The new KB Videos coming soon.