Topic: Script help

Hi, What I need help with is the opening of my zombie film. It is about a man who is making a cure for cancer and it goes wrong. But how should this be introduced. Any help would be appreciated. mini/smile

~Hal

Re: Script help

How about:
Loc: Laboratory
Action: Man walks to some test tubes, whistling. He does a few actions and then accidentally knocks one over. He cleans up the mess but a droplet remains. The bacteria in this droplet start multiplying. The man comes in the next day, and slips in the now huge puddle of his spilled medicine. The medicine 'eats' him, thus starting the apocalypse.

Re: Script help

You should add some incorrect science theory into it. If we were to ever cure cancer in a person's body, the best we could do is reverse the reproduction of mutated cells in the body. What I think the person who does the procedure and makes the theory should do is work on a person with brain cancer. The man with cancer dies during the procedure, but then comes back as a zombie. Then the person who theorized the idea rethinks it and says before the Titles..... "UH OH!"
in a whisper.

I usually don't like Zombie media, but I hope this helps.

Re: Script help

KeeponBrickin wrote:

You should add some incorrect science theory into it. If we were to ever cure cancer in a person's body, the best we could do is reverse the reproduction of mutated cells in the body. What I think the person who does the procedure and makes the theory should do is work on a person with brain cancer. The man with cancer dies during the procedure, but then comes back as a zombie. Then the person who theorized the idea rethinks it and says before the Titles..... "UH OH!"
in a whisper.

I usually don't like Zombie media, but I hope this helps.

I LOVE that idea, If i do it ( which I probably will. ) Iwould give you credit if you would like. mini/smile

~Hal

Re: Script help

co0lwill wrote:
KeeponBrickin wrote:

You should add some incorrect science theory into it. If we were to ever cure cancer in a person's body, the best we could do is reverse the reproduction of mutated cells in the body. What I think the person who does the procedure and makes the theory should do is work on a person with brain cancer. The man with cancer dies during the procedure, but then comes back as a zombie. Then the person who theorized the idea rethinks it and says before the Titles..... "UH OH!"
in a whisper.

I usually don't like Zombie media, but I hope this helps.

I LOVE that idea, If i do it ( which I probably will. ) Iwould give you credit if you would like. mini/smile


THANK YOU! I would be glad to be given credit. Copy the url to my channel, make it a link, and credit me as LKB Films.