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Topic: Need help with Joker Scene Script

I need help making part of a script. I am not completely great at making up jokes for the Joker, But I do have an idea of what will happen. The Joker has Robin (Jason Todd) in handcuffs and is beating him up with a crowbar in a deserted one story building. Then he leaves and sets off a time bomb with a remote and Batman comes too late to help Jason. What I need help with is jokes and lines that the Joker says while beating up Jason. To give you an idea, here is a clip from Batman: Under the Red Hood that is what I'm in some way trying to base off of:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7KYUJv5ODYw

Please reply if you have any ideas.

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

So... Death in the family in lego mini/smile

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

ghostofmrsdaystudios wrote:

So... Death in the family in lego mini/smile


Wow!!! The film is going to be called "Batman: A Death in the Family". So cool that someone guessed correctly.

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

Well, A Death in the family is one of the most well know Comics. mini/smile

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ghostofmrsdaystudios wrote:

Well, A Death in the family is one of the most well know Comics. mini/smile

Yeah

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

Well is anyone going to help me or what?

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

Well I'll try mini/tongue Maybe include Jokes from the comics (I'm the Gosh darn batman, ONE PUNCH ext)  or maybe make up you're own jokes referencing the comics (like lets say Joker talking to Jason "you're more annoying then Damien". i can't think of any thing else right now, hope i helped

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

Help me... PLEASE!

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

Sorry, I meant to help before and never got around to saying so.
Anyway, do you have a basic script, or should I start from scratch?

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Pritchard Studios wrote:

Anyway, do you have a basic script, or should I start from scratch?

All I need are ideas for lines and jokes that the Joker will say to Jason while beating him with a crowbar. I don't want to copy and rip-off the film "Batman: Under the Red Hood" and I want the jokes to be almost or completely original.

I haven't typed the script for this particular scene in the film yet, but I have an idea of what I want.

Note: My Joker is most like the Mark Hammil incarnation from Batman: The Animated Series and has different character than the Heath Ledger Joker most people know about today.

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

Joker: You know what mini bat, I think I'm ROBBING the Bats of his most annoying side KICK
Robbing being a pun and "kick" well, he kicks him.

Joker: Batman needs to raise the BAR on his side kicks before I do it for him.

Joker: Whats behind that CROWbar of his?

Joker(playing with crowbar): don't worry, mr J will bring "this" to a "head"

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

"I have a survey for you Bats!" hefts crowbar. "Question one: How does this feel?" SMACK.

"So a bar walks into a man... Man I messed that one up!"

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Re: Need help with Joker Scene Script

legogod wrote:

"So a bar walks into a man... Man I messed that one up!"

then after that, he could say: "man I'm a WACK-job"

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