Topic: my first screen play (revised)
Hopefully it will be better then the original screen play, hope you like it.:)
Int-Call center-day
The scene opens to a Call Center were we can see Joe sitting at his desk taking calls and typing away at his computer.
Joe(taking call)
Hello how can i help you. Sir I'm afraid this isn't a shoe shop goodbye. No i will not ring you back.
Joes boss
(Shouts)Joe get over here.
Joe gets up and walks over to his boss and as hes talking to him you can see Joe's stuff being nicked over his shoulder
JOES BOSS
Now Joe Your work has been recently, how do i put this, lacking in quality. Now Joe i am throwing you a life line here, a way to make sure you don't get fired and neither do I.
Joe staring into space.
JOES BOSS
(shouts)Joe,Joe. Joe are you even listening to me.
Joe
(nervously)Sir er ye sir
JOES BOSS
Good, now go out there and make me some money.
Joe goes back to his desk to find that all his stuff has disappeared and all that remains is his desk
Joe
I hate my life.
int-living room-night
Joe opens the door to his house and walks in shutting the door behind him.he walks over to his red sofa and sits down. he then picks up the remote to switch on the television. the T.v stays on for a couple seconds playing some sort of bad commodey program before it suddenly loses signal.
JOE
(Sharp groan)
Joe gets up and walks over to the television and adjusts the Ariel. This action makes no difference to the display on the the television screen. Joe then resorts to hitting the television a couple times to when it eventually explodes. the T.v appears burnt as well as Joe's head.
Joe
i hate my life.
Screen fades out to the credits


