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Oh...so I can't even change that "Pfff" with a "pfui", "umpf" or "Tssk", I guess. Well, anyway I'm still not sure whether I'll use that line or not.

God, this post sounds ridiculous...

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Well, it doesn't really matter what noise you make... Just as long as there's a sarcastic noise I guess it's fine mini/tongue

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I seem to be having a bit of trouble with my script. :I There are actually some parts in it which are WAY too serious, and I have no idea how to end it.

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Just Kidden wrote:

Well, it doesn't really matter what noise you make... Just as long as there's a sarcastic noise I guess it's fine mini/tongue

Oh, ok then mini/tongue
@Jstudios: if you want, I can help you get an idea.

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lets see.
I will have new computer next week...
If I make the story caricatures and sets built by then could I still make an entry worth doing mini/yes mini/no ?

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MPfist0 wrote:

Oh, ok then mini/tongue
@Jstudios: if you want, I can help you get an idea.

I actually have an idea, and most of the script. I just need to find more jokes to make, because SOMEHOW this script seems to be taking itself seriously.
Also, today I built a really small train for my film, I actually kinda like the look of it. Thanks to Realbrick for helping LOADS. mini/bigsmile

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I need to build a train too. This may be difficult mini/tongue

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jstudios wrote:
MPfist0 wrote:

Oh, ok then mini/tongue
@Jstudios: if you want, I can help you get an idea.

I actually have an idea, and most of the script. I just need to find more jokes to make, because SOMEHOW this script seems to be taking itself seriously.
Also, today I built a really small train for my film, I actually kinda like the look of it. Thanks to Realbrick for helping LOADS. mini/bigsmile

Well, I meant an idea for the end...and I think I may help with some jokes too.

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Dang-it guys. Looks like i got the ten lines curse. mini/sad
I just finished my script and was about to make the casting call, when my camera broke. mini/madhead
I don't think I'll be able to make my entry...
Good luck to all the other entrants though. mini/smile

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Hmmm... still thinking... and spaming, oh no. I have to make a list of stuff... yep. mini/smile

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... Oh yeah.

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MPfist0 wrote:

Well, I meant an idea for the end...and I think I may help with some jokes too.

Oh really? Thanks! Are you gonna be on skype sometime soon?

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Well, I'm probably going to be on skype most of the time, today (except for a few hours: I have a brother...older than me).

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Yes I'm In!
Is it all right if I have more diologe as part of the lines or do they have to be by themselves
Example:

Larry, Larry, Larry, I have exactly Zero Faith in you.

If I can't do this my I'll have to start over from scratch mini/sad

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You can, since the original line is there completely.

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I have a question. Can some of the lines be off-screen, or during a title?

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They have to be spoken.

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They will be spoken.

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Then yes, you can. mini/tongue

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Just finished my script. I will be posting a casting call fairly soon.

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Script finished! Casting Call out: http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/to … he-family/