Topic: Untitled Film Idea

Hello, this is a film idea I have for my first full brickfilm (although I'm new to the site I'm not new to brickfilming mini/wink )
this is the basic plot line I have although I have only given you half of it as if I gave it all away the film would be less interesting mini/lol  sorry it's a bit long, i can babble.

A group of three university students who live on the ground floor apartment somewhere in America, they get on
very well and have nothing abnormal about them i.e. they come and go from university etc. One night the doorbell
of their apartment rings and upon opening the door, at first glance there is no-one there, but when they look
down there is a white terrier looking dog, with a red collar sitting on their doorstep. After taking the dog
in the three students discuss what they are going to do with the dog, whether they're going to keep it or hand it
over to the pound, after much contemplation the students decide to keep the dog and see if it has a nice temprement
and after one week revise their choice. halfway through the week the students are very pleased with the dog, it
seems to fit in with their lives quite well, that night the dog starts to whimper and whine and the students are
baffled and confused at what it wants, they try giving it food - noting - they try playing with it - nothing - they
then realise the dog is looking outside, they then slide the rear door open and let the dog out, immidietly the dog
starts digging in the garden, dirt going up the windows one of the students grabs the dog and yanks him inside,
closing the rear door behind him suddenly the dog starts whimpering and whining again and all the students let out
a sigh similtaniously, after a few minutes of the dog whining one of the students opens the rear door, letting the
dog out to dig, the two students look at him and they then agree better a dirty window that a whimpering dog, so
they sit down to watch some television, with the dog still outside. Half an hour later, and forgetting to let the
dog in the students realise and run to the rear door swinging it open, there the dog was, still digging, all three
students decide they best investigate what the dog is digging for and upon looking in the hole it had created they
see a black rectangle which appears to be made of leather, a breif case. They yank it from the hole and take it
inside, the dog following, and place it on a desk, they then notice that at the top of the breif case is a set of
four brass tumblers, a lock...

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Re: Untitled Film Idea

Eh, it kind of sounds a little cliche. It depends on where you go with it.

Re: Untitled Film Idea

Yes, I realised that whilst I was coming up with the idea, but it may add effect to the story because if the build up to them opening the case is a bit on the bland side it could increase the "wow" factor when you find out what is in the case. I just hope what I have in the case is strange enough.

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