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Topic: Script Writer Needed

To me it seems I just don't get the gist of writing a script. It sounds to much like a book, and when I try to write it as a brickfilm script, it just sounds terrible. Would anyone like to be my scriptwriter? Show me some scripts that you've written first. My main focus is a police comedy with several intense scenes. So, if you would like to write  scripts for me, then just send me a PM and if your on Youtube, then I'll subscribe to you.
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Re: Script Writer Needed

I'd love to help, honestly. But just have a few questions first:

1. Is this a series or a film?
2. If it's a film how long is it?
3. If it's a series how long will each episode be?
4. Do you have more info on characters, plot lines, things of this like? And if so, how much creative freedom would I have?
5. And lost but not least, if it's a series how often would I need to write.

I'd be glad to give you a sample of my work, I'll start digging through some of my old files and see what I can find, I just need you to answer these questions first so I'll know if I'll have the time to write it for you.

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Re: Script Writer Needed

I've gotten some practice with writing scripts. I write them very specifically, down to the shot directions. I'm good with comedic cinematography. I've learned some stuff while writing scripts for my sitcom series; Bricks.

Just give me an idea that you have and I'll do the rest. I'll need some info on all your characters, as much as you can tell me. I might even add to a character's personality if the character doesn't have enough personality that I can work with.

I don't have any completed good scripts I can show you. If you really want to see something, I'll have to give you part of a script.

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Re: Script Writer Needed

Here is a tip for choosing your screenplay writer. Pick one that has mutual vision and approach.

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Re: Script Writer Needed

Okay, you questions shall be answered.
1. Series
2. It's not a film
3. roughly 30s-4.00+ minutes
4. Well, the main characters, Mason and Diploma, both have different personalities. Diploma is serious, but not angry. Mason is dumb but is also smart. The commissioner is agreeable most of the time. And that's it so far.
5. well, I like to have a new script every week. But if not, either a fortnight or every 22 days. But it really depends what your capable of. Here is a link to one of my scripts. If you like it and think it's good, then please tell me.
http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/to … interview/
I'm not sure who I'm going to choose yet, but you guys both seem good. I'll just need to see a script or two.
Thanks for your help dude mini/smile

Last edited by ShadowSupremacy (August 25, 2011 (10:49pm))

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Re: Script Writer Needed

Thanks dude!
Okay, well the idea is that Mason is going into the police station ready to be interview by Diploma (Lieutenant).
Here is the script. http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/to … interview/
I'm not entirely sure if it's good, but if there is anything you are able to change, then go right ahead mini/smile
Also, whenever your ready, just send me the script/s.
Thanks dude mini/smile

minifig051 wrote:

I've gotten some practice with writing scripts. I write them very specifically, down to the shot directions. I'm good with comedic cinematography. I've learned some stuff while writing scripts for my sitcom series; Bricks.

Just give me an idea that you have and I'll do the rest. I'll need some info on all your characters, as much as you can tell me. I might even add to a character's personality if the character doesn't have enough personality that I can work with.

I don't have any completed good scripts I can show you. If you really want to see something, I'll have to give you part of a script.

Last edited by ShadowSupremacy (August 25, 2011 (10:50pm))

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Re: Script Writer Needed

All right, I'll re-write your script for you. I read that script and the second episode, and they both seem short and incomplete. I'm going to combine and extend them so you'll have a longer, better first episode.

By the way, you're contradicted yourself in Mason's character description. You said he's "dumb but also smart".
Your scripts characterized him as an unattentive, stupid, idiot. I'll just go with that.

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Re: Script Writer Needed

Well Mason is also smart. He'll become smarter in each episode. I don't want to make a movie with him being a clod. And keep the volcabulary simple and make him sound like a 12 year old because I'm doing Mason's voice. Thanks dude mini/smile

minifig051 wrote:

All right, I'll re-write your script for you. I read that script and the second episode, and they both seem short and incomplete. I'm going to combine and extend them so you'll have a longer, better first episode.

By the way, you're contradicted yourself in Mason's character description. You said he's "dumb but also smart".
Your scripts characterized him as an unattentive, stupid, idiot. I'll just go with that.

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