Hey everyone. Here is the Mason and Diploma Shooting Range script. Please tell me if there is anything I need to change or add. I know there is only two scenes, so that's why I'm asking people with Script writing experience and the fellow brickfilmers on BiM to help me lengthen this script.

SCRIPT

SHOOTING RANGE SCRIPT

EXT-OUTSIDE SHOOTING RANGE-MORNING

Mason: Diploma, where are we and what are we doing here?

Diploma: Well Mason, this is the Shooting Range. Here is where you will train using ranged weapons. This is one of the most crucial elements in a police officers carrier, so you have to promise me that you will come-

Mason: Are you saying I can use guns?!

Diploma: Yes Mason. You can use guns

Mason: Yay!

Scene two

INT-SHOOTING RANGE- MORNING

Diploma: Okay Mason. Pick up that loaded Glock 22 on the table behind you

(Mason walks over to pick up the weapon)

Diploma: Now, when I press this red button, I want you to focus on the targets that will appear in front of you.

Mason: Okay. Focus. Fooocus. Focus. Fo-

(Diploma presses the red button)

Mason: Wow! A Gatling Minigun!

(Mason picks up the loaded minigun from a table a fires it shooting several officers)

Diploma: That son of a-

(Mason shoots Diploma)

END (So far)

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-Supremacy