Topic: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

More than often do I see scripts in the forum that are written too disjointed and unclear. This is annoying. By writing your screenplay in the right format, it will:

1. Look more professional.

2. Be easier on the eye.

3. Improve your chances to be taken seriously.

4. And as a result of that, improve your chances on finding voice actors.

The format is very simple. First you have your scene heading, here's an example:



EXT. BALCONY - NOON



EXT. stands for exterior, which you write if the scene is set outside. If  the scene is set inside, you write INT. (interior).

Then you write the location of the scene, the example it is set on a balcony. If it's set in a kitchen, write "KITCHEN".

Lastly in the scene heading, write the time of the seen, like "NIGHT", "MORNING", etc.

The scene heading is always written in CAPITALS.


Second, you have your scene description. This is written in present tense, and NOT in capitals, it's centered to the left. Do not mention camera angles in the description, this isn't interesting to read for others, nor is it relevant to them. It might be easy for you, but you're better to either storyboard or make a shotlist.

Dialogue is written like this:


                                                      PILLOW

                                              Insert generic line.


The character talking is written in capitals, above the dialogue, which is not written in capital letters. Both are centered in the middle.


Then there's transitions. Thing like "CUT TO BLACK" or "FADE TO". These are written in capitals and centered to the RIGHT. After a transition, a new scene heading should follow, unless it's the end of the script.

That's it, basically. This format has no downsides. It's easier to write, and it looks a lot better. You can do this in Word, but if you want you can download a screenwriting software called CeltX (just google it), or Final Draft if you're willing to pay a ridiculous price, but that really isn't worth it.


Here's an example of a scene from the JUNO script:


EXT. CENTENNIAL LANE - DUSK

JUNO MacGUFF stands on a placid street in a nondescript subdivision, facing the curb. It’s FALL. Juno is sixteen years old, an artfully bedraggled burnout kid. She winces and shields her eyes from the glare of the sun. The object of her rapt attention is a battered living room set, abandoned curbside by its former owners. There is a fetid-looking leather recliner, a chrome-edged coffee table, and a tasteless latchhooked rug featuring a roaring tiger.

                                                                       JUNO (V.O.)
                                                               It started with a chair.


Oh, right. (V.O.) stands for Voice over, and (O.S.) stands for off screen.

Last edited by Pillow (November 16, 2011 (10:51pm))

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenplay

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

What? Is there a point you're trying to make that I am not seeing?

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

No, I'm just giving some resources to help.

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

Wait, why don't we put this in the Resources section as well?
Great article by the way.

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

topitmunkeydog wrote:

Wait, why don't we put this in the Resources section as well?
Great article by the way.

Good point. mini/smile

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

Great article Pillow, your tips and advice are really helpful and definitely help me when i'm writing a script. mini/smile

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

Wow Pillow, great idea for a topic I must admit. It's a wonder someone hadn't already thought of it.

But for those that would like to learn more, I suggest checking out this site. Now not everything can be used on a ten minute brickfilm of course, but if you look through you can find some great tips in there. But if you plan on writting some longer Brickfilms though, I suggest reading over it very carefully. This is where I learnt everything I know, and so far nothing in it's done me wrong. And since this topics about formatting, I suggest checking out the formatting section in the website and reading over some of the sample screenplays (they even got Pirates of the Caribbean and Raiders of the Lost Ark drafts in there). This can be a great source for learning how to write more professionally.

P.S. TO THE NUIMOBILE!!

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

Great topic. It's already helped me.

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

I edited the thread title to make a little more clearer what we are discussing, in the hope of avoiding further stylistic arguments.

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

I've just haphazardly deleted a lot of posts, so apologies if I removed something legitimate.

This is a thread for displaying and discussing the industry standard method for formatting a screenplay. If anyone wants to start a general script discussion thread to show off their personal writing methods, feel free to do so.

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Thanks, Vik - this actually hepled! mini/wink

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

I don't know if you guys are using word to write your screenplays, but adobe has a program called story just for writing screenplays.  It's free, and it's easy.  all you have to do is duble hit the enter key and a little formating menu pops up then you pick what you want.  You will need adobe air to run it though.

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

The free program Celtix is designed for writing screenplays. That's what most people use.

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

story's still in beta so im not sure how it compares to the ones you guys mentioned

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Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

When I write the script, do I need to put the (O.S.) or (V.O.)?????

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

(O.S.) is Off-screen so if the minifig is, well, off-screen, you put (O.S.). But if the minifig is on-screen (I believe this is how it works), you put (V.O.) for Voice-over.

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

but do I NEED to put them?????

Re: How to write a professionally-formatted screenplay

I don't really think so, so I don't. It's up to you, though.