Topic: The Crossroad (Script)

Hello, Tripod here.

I have a new script i'm working on called "The Crossroad", a tale based on the temptation of Jesus. By the first scene, it may not be obvious, but it will expand out into a journey of temptations and overcoming those weaknesses. This first scene is more akin to a prologue, really. Some feedback would be lovely.

The Crossroad.pdf

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