Re: Post Your Story Ideas

Brickyman wrote:

I don't think it's a good idea to let other people name your characters.

You should give them names according to their character.

For example, if one officer was some big time, high ranking cop who had brought massive criminal empires and was feared by al the criminal underground, a name like "Barry Jones" wouldn't exactly be appropriate, I would probably give him a edgier name like "Jack Slade" or something..

That's good advice, actually. I'll tell you who the characters are: one's the 'boss' (still considering what police rank to give both of them) and he's quite mean. Nothing escapes him. Apart from the ocassional 'quite a lot', if you see what I mean. mini/tongue
The other is of a lower rank, and he's kind of the onlooker of his bosses' triumphs and mishaps. Often he'll try to get involved, which is either really good or really really bad. You just can't tell with him.
The reason I'm asking is because I really have no idea at the moment for a good name. I want something that'll stick in your mind like a horrible song.

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Re: Post Your Story Ideas

Generalned wrote:
StudioL30 wrote:

Generalned, this topic is titled "Post Your Story Ideas". If you have questions, post them in the appropriate section/topic and keep unrelated ones clean.

look mate i asked a question despite what this topic is about idiots like yourself who actually take their time writing an off topic comment telling me not to post here look if you want trouble this aint the forum to be on.. I asked for help not advice were to post so l2read..

StudioL30 is right. There's no need to tell him off like that. This thread is for story ideas. If you have unrelated questions, find or start an appropriate thread. You'll be more likely to get quality answers that way as well.

hi mate yes i just double posted and as i've said before i dont mean to its because i use a phone as my internet is down on my computer

Posting from your phones shouldn't keep you from editing your posts. There's a link at the bottom of every post you make.

Take a moment and read [guide]. You'll have a much smoother time if you put a little thought into writing your posts well and getting along with others.

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Thanks, Jargon. That about sums it all up.

I've just completed the first haqlf of the first episode of my Police Officer Series, and it's going pretty well.

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Fair enough ill try an start a thread just for my questions just would have been easy if someone could help me out..

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Re: Post Your Story Ideas

The Artistic Visionary

Got the idea today, it's about an artist who tries and tries to paint a picture but his dog keeps disturbing him. Comedy ensues. I thought about writing the script, but my computer went berzerk. I'm using a mobile phone now. Gaah!!

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Re: Post Your Story Ideas

Thunderbolt wrote:

The Artistic Visionary

Got the idea today, it's about an artist who tries and tries to paint a picture but his dog keeps disturbing him. Comedy ensues. I thought about writing the script, but my computer went berzerk. I'm using a mobile phone now. Gaah!!

Are you trying to make it original, or completely clichéd?

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I'm starting an Agent film for Mission: IMPOSSIBLE that crosses the lines of brickfilming.

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My Lego Policemen Episode 1 film has been completed! (EDIT: Removing promotion) I'm planning on turning it into a series.

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That's not a story idea Genzarata, that's promotion.

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Re: Post Your Story Ideas

Kinzcove wrote:

That's not a story idea Genzarata, that's promotion.

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Sorted mini/rolleyes   mini/lol

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Re: Post Your Story Ideas

Terrace Heights

(A story about cops, politics, and how just one sheriff can turn around one of the poorest neighborhoods in the city.)

    “Sheriff Hughes was horrible.” They all thought so. He fired thirty-four deputies during his twelve year term, only because they had to shoot at gang members. He didn’t want to lose his job for having his deputies randomly shoot people. He was only elected because he was the only candidate on the Democrat ticket. The town knew that he was a bad sheriff, but they felt that electing their Democratic senators and representatives was more important than voting for a new sheriff.

    During Hughes’ term, things on the East Side were horrible. Gunshots were more common than the ice cream truck. Gangs were infesting the East Side, and no-one could stop them. Then, the citizens of the housing projects of the East Side figured out how to stop the problem. Here was their solution: If they vote for the Republican sheriff, then maybe he would put an end to all of these gangs! The idea would spread like wildfire. Every day, people were putting up more and more posters for John Harwell, the Republican candidate.

    On Election Day, Voting District Four had the highest turnout ever. John Harwell won in a landslide: 80% Harwell, 20% Hughes. The next day, Hughes went missing, and was never seen again. The new sheriff had a very strict agenda. One week after Election Day, he rehired all thirty four cops that were fired, and hired one hundred more. After a month of training, he placed about half of them in the twenty towers, one hundred row houses, and fifty small houses that made up Terrace Heights, the city’s largest housing project.

    The rest of the new officers were placed in Harrison Township, where all of the gang members who were kicked out of the public housing system lived. It also was very crime-infested. It had lots of condemned old houses, unlike Terrace Heights, which was what you would call a “concrete jungle”. On their first day, the new and old officers alike made twenty-three arrests; all for drug possession and vandalism, except for three murder arrests. This pattern continued for several months.
   
Two years later, it was re-election time. The citizens were very satisfied with the new sheriff, but they only had one request: that he moved over to the Democrat ticket so that they could vote for their representative. Realizing that he would lose many votes if he did not, he reluctantly moved over to the other ticket.
   
    Weeks later, Clay Hughes was found in a condemned house in Harrison playing illicit poker with five wanted criminals. He was charged with a misdemeanor for gambling and given a $500 fine. However, the gang members he was playing with were given larger sentences, with the largest being life without parole. They tried to interrogate him, but his lawyer told him not to say anything.

    Over the last two years, tons of progress has been made. Developers are creating plans to put in a mall right next to Terrace Heights, which has been slated for demolition and reconstruction. Many industries have considered moving to the area. Two hundred condemned houses have been slated for demolition in Harrison. The East Side has been transformed from a slum to a normal working class neighborhood. The residents are very happy with this change.

    The day after Harwell was elected for his second term, a death threat was sent to him. The person sending the death threat also threatened to kidnap his wife and put ransom on her. Forensic experts then determined that the handwriting on the letter was that of Clay Hughes. They also found his fingerprints on the letter. The District Four Police Department immediately issued a county-wide manhunt for him.

    One week later, they found him behind a dumpster at McDonald’s in Harrison. He was immediately put into interrogation. At first, his lawyer told him not to say anything again, but after seventeen hours of interrogation, he finally admitted to sending him a death threat and threatening to kidnap his wife. He also turned in four of his aliases. One month later, he was sentenced to five years in federal prison for terroristic threats. The town was shocked to hear about this.

    Five years after this, things have changed dramatically not only on the East Side, but all over town. Middle-class businessmen are riding the city buses; before, they were afraid of the gang members mugging them. The East Side Mall was doing great; people were shopping there now because they were not afraid of the gangs anymore. The people in the town kept him in office for the rest of his life.

(written by OSUbuck3y3 for my use)

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13:58    BertL    you mean in high school people don't spontaneously break into song and dance

Re: Post Your Story Ideas

one_man_show wrote:

Terrace Heights

(A story about cops, politics, and how just one sheriff can turn around one of the poorest neighborhoods in the city.)

I'm not aware of a city with its own sheriff. Usually, sheriffs are responsible for entire counties. If you live in the United States, you may have heard about the Middlesex County (my county) sheriff who committed suicide, in Massachusetts.

Re: Post Your Story Ideas

mcoov wrote:
one_man_show wrote:

Terrace Heights

(A story about cops, politics, and how just one sheriff can turn around one of the poorest neighborhoods in the city.)

I'm not aware of a city with its own sheriff. Usually, sheriffs are responsible for entire counties. If you live in the United States, you may have heard about the Middlesex County (my county) sheriff who committed suicide, in Massachusetts.

Oh yes- I heard about that on channel 7.

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13:58    BertL    you mean in high school people don't spontaneously break into song and dance

Re: Post Your Story Ideas

one_man_show wrote:

Terrace Heights

(A story about cops, politics, and how just one sheriff can turn around one of the poorest neighborhoods in the city.)

Excellent! An extremely well thought out film. Thank goodness we still have people like you, or everyone would be making films involving either fight scenes or random jokes. Good work!

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Re: Post Your Story Ideas

Well, just to let ya'know. The idea isn't his. It's somebody elses, and once again like his previous Degrassi ripped off plot idea, he's just posting somebody elses work.

-Originality isn't hard.

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Damn. I was hoping.

-Originality is harder than you might think. I'm not gonna do this - I really can't be bothered - but I bet if you gave me one idea, I could find the 'original', so to speak.

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well; actually; it's not a fully ripped off idea.

You see this guy wanted to rewrite my degrassi idea- he rewrote a bit and I said no; so I asked for him to write me a cop movie. That was what he came up with.

This is his degrassi stinker of an idea:

The Gap

    Vincent is a high-school student who lives in the north side of Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. He was held back once in middle school. However, he keeps in touch with his friends from before he was held back. One of his best friends from elementary and middle school is Andrew. They have been friends since elementary school. They also live in the same neighborhood. An important part of the plot is the fact that they are both turning eighteen. Andrew is graduating this year, but Vincent is not. It angers Vincent that Andrew is constantly talking about his plans to go to University of Pennsylvania and become a physician. While he is preparing to send his SAT scores to UPenn, Vincent is trying to finish up his classes so he can complete his three-year program in time. He is also an excellent hockey player. Will he have to give up his favorite sport to graduate on time? Vincent has been dating a girl named Katie for two years. He is determined to keep his relationship together, but James, the school’s all-star linebacker, is been trying to ask out Katie since the beginning of middle school. Will his plans follow through? Another important factor in Vincent’s struggle to catch up is his parents. They are beginning to think that Katie is distracting him from his studies. Will they force him to end his relationship? One of the minor subplots is the soccer team. The North Allegheny High School soccer team is one of the best in all of Western Pennsylvania. Vincent’s team will go on to win the State championship, if they beat the prestigious Central High School from Philadelphia. Will Vincent have to forfeit his championship game to get his grades up? Overall, he has one choice: complete the tedious acceleration classes, or spend his last years in high school wishing to be with his friends.

The guy's name is: OSUbuck3y3 BTW; ask him about it if you got a problem.

MATT

13:58    BertL    you mean in high school people don't spontaneously break into song and dance

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Sounds alright, though I'm not really into that sorta thing.

I've had an idea floating around in my head for a while for "The Great Beyond", a longer, indirect sequel to my earlier film The Great Outdoors, though this time it's about a spaceman who think's he's landed on a distant planet, but it's really just my house.
I've already got some ideas, and I'm being careful I don't accidentally end up ripping off "The Magic Portal". mini/tongue
Though before I start working on anything I've gotta complete my bits of Strigoi, and then get GABFOS done.

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GABFOS mini/love mini/love

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GABFOS!!! It's going to be amazing. The city set is taking forever to build, though.