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A Untitled 'Suspiria' Idea Homage
A student taking a French language course is required to do a project on something involving French culture,
she decides to do her project on 'Fortune Telling'. She preforms a tarot card reading for herself and she gets a 'Death' card. She does not think most of it and continues with the project. One day staying after school in the library to work on the project, it soon becomes dark outside and she must leave. Though before leaving she goes through a short terror filled experience as she is being chased by a hatchet wielding figure. Strange witch and ghost like things happen. The lockers flinging open one by one as she is being chased, the glass breaking. Once she leaves the school she thinks she is safe. The next morning police are seen examining the school grounds as three dead bodies are found on the schools lawn. The girl is interrogated about what happened and she explains her experience, but they easily do not beleive her. As she goes deeper and deeper into her project she begins to research a subtopic, 'witchcraft'. She does not beleive there are witches after her but she beleives there is always a possibility for everything. She then does research on the school but comes up with nothing except an original plan of the schools layout. She then is confused, an extra room within the school is blocked off by a wall. The girl investigates the room and comes to the conclusion that there might actually be witches within the school, but she may have come to far into the investigation to turn back unharmed.

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You have a lot of dark story ideas, Kinz.

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Kinzcove wrote:

A Untitled 'Suspiria' Idea Homage
A student taking a French language course is required to do a project on something involving French culture,
she decides to do her project on 'Fortune Telling'. She preforms a tarot card reading for herself and she gets a 'Death' card. She does not think most of it and continues with the project. One day staying after school in the library to work on the project, it soon becomes dark outside and she must leave. Though before leaving she goes through a short terror filled experience as she is being chased by a hatchet wielding figure. Strange witch and ghost like things happen. The lockers flinging open one by one as she is being chased, the glass breaking. Once she leaves the school she thinks she is safe. The next morning police are seen examining the school grounds as three dead bodies are found on the schools lawn. The girl is interrogated about what happened and she explains her experience, but they easily do not beleive her. As she goes deeper and deeper into her project she begins to research a subtopic, 'witchcraft'. She does not beleive there are witches after her but she beleives there is always a possibility for everything. She then does research on the school but comes up with nothing except an original plan of the schools layout. She then is confused, an extra room within the school is blocked off by a wall. The girl investigates the room and comes to the conclusion that there might actually be witches within the school, but she may have come to far into the investigation to turn back unharmed.

That, Kinzcove, is in my opinion your best story idea so far.

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This is an idea I have (based off an old show; AND WARNING; RATHER LONG):

The setting is Toronto, during the summer following the high school graduation of many of the Degrassi High characters, before they part ways for university and adult life. The story opens on graduation day, approximately two years (some of the characters may have taken gap year, while the middle group would have just completed year 12, and the youngest group of kids (Tessa Campinelli, Scooter, and Bartholomew) would still have been in their senior year when fall came; after the series finalé, "One Last Dance", and one day shy of 4 years after the first date between Joey Jeremiah and Caitlin Ryan to the school dance in the third season finalé, "Bye-Bye Junior High".

The crux of the feature focused on long-time recurrent couple Joey and Caitlin. Caitlin is approximately one year younger than Joey, yet the two had been classmates since Joey's dysgraphia necessitated his repeat of grade 8. Despite having been held back four years earlier, he remained closer to his friends in his former class than to his contemporary classmates, aside from Caitlin. As Joey approaches his nineteenth birthday, his friends are preparing for university and far-off travel, while he faces another year of high school. Exacerbating the situation, Caitlin has taken a number of extra classes to complete high school in three years, and has just graduated with Joey's former peers.

Eager to hold on to her before she leaves to study journalism at Carleton University in Ottawa, Joey proposes to Caitlin at the graduation party hosted by Caitlin's soon-to-be roommate, Lucy Fernandez. Caitlin demurs, explaining that she is not ready for that kind of commitment. Joey storms out, only to run into classmate Tessa Campanelli fresh from an argument with her boyfriend Todd, and he agrees to give her a ride home.

Arriving at the Campanelli house, Tessa pulls Joey toward her for a kiss. The next day, on her break from the photo processing store, Tessa visits Joey next door at Shoppers Drug Mart and asks him on a date. Tessa rejects Spike's argument, noting that Caitlin will be leaving for university in a matter of weeks anyway. Joey, though initially hesitant, accepts Tessa's offer, has a great time, and (as he tells Wheels the next day) gets to "third base." Joey sees little of Caitlin who is working as a waitress to make money for university; instead, he spends most of the summer with Tessa who, unlike Caitlin, "goes all the way." Tessa confides in her co-worker, Christine "Spike" Nelson , the details of the relationship. Spike reminds her that Joey and Caitlin have a pattern of breaking up and reuniting.

Other plot lines include Wheels spending the summer trying to get his 200-dollar junk car to work in order to move to Calgary in September to be with Karen, Alexa preparing her wedding with Simon, and Snake's  hope that his lifeguard job will impress a woman enough to take his virginity. Joey is uncharacteristically cruel and annoying toward Snake, incessantly teasing him about their contrasting sexual success.

Tessa realises that Joey is still dating Caitlin with no intention of leaving her. Tessa dumps Joey without telling him that she's pregnant and having an abortion. Joey and Caitlin finally make love on his nineteenth birthday, approximately a week before Caitlin, Lucy, and Snake are all scheduled to depart. The coitus is Caitlin's first time, and she is unaware that it is not also Joey's first. Unknown to Joey, Caitlin has decided to attend a local university in order to remain close to him.

The next day, at a lake house party, hosted by Lucy's boyfriend Bronco Davis, Caitlin accepts Joey's earlier marriage proposal. An overly confident Joey teases Snake one too many times and the latter lashes back, loudly criticising Joey for his infidelity toward Caitlin and fornication with Tessa. (Caitlin's now infamous line, "Tessa Campanelli? You were f***ing Tessa Campanelli?" was edited to "You were sleeping with Tessa Campanelli?" for airing in the United States). She storms out after breaking off their engagement and telling Joey of her would-be plans to study locally in order to be with him.

Immediately after unintentionally breaking up Joey and Caitlin, Snake realises that former classmate Allison Hunter is drowning and rushes in to the lake to rescue her. Everyone congratulates him for saving the her life, but he breaks down in a flood of emotion and anxiety.

While Snake is arguing with Joey and saving Allison, Wheels is driving drunk with Lucy to get more chips for the party, and collides with another car. The crash kills a two-year-old boy in the other car, and both cripples and blinds Lucy, an aspiring filmmaker who was scheduled to major in the subject. Joey visits Wheels in jail, where Wheels asserts that it is not his fault that the child was not wearing a seatbelt or that Lucy needed more chips. Snake is disgusted by Wheels, particularly in light of Wheels having lost his own parents to a drunk driver three years earlier.

In the epilogue, most of the gang meet up again two months later for the 19 October wedding of Alexa Pappadopoulos to Simon Dexter. Absent are Wheels, Erica Farrell, and Lucy. Still incarcerated, Wheels is set to plead guilty for his crimes, while Erica is teaching abroad in the Dominican Republic and has met a new boyfriend in the process. Meanwhile, Lucy has since regained her vision in one of her eyes but is still not well enough to attend the wedding. Snake is accompanied by his girlfriend Pam whom he met at university, and he appears considerably more self-assured; he is still vocally disgusted by Wheels. Both Snake and Caitlin are receptive to Joey's apologies for the way he had behaved toward them, and the former fiancés share a dance as friends. He predicts that she will be famous.

ALL COMMENTS ARE WELCOME

MATT

13:58    BertL    you mean in high school people don't spontaneously break into song and dance

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Sounds cool.

I had an idea about an exterminator being called to a house to take care of cockroaches, only to find out that they are a lot bigger, badder, and meaner than usual cockroaches (basically they're just giant, super strong mofos). An Evil Dead-esque fight to survive ensures.
Yep. That's about it. I just thought it would make a cool ultra-voilent, low-budget horror flick like The Evil Dead or Braindead, but with giant cockroaches.
I'd totes make it in a gap year or something. That would be fun.

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Sounds awesome. Maybe it should be in the future, on the place where Tsernobyl happened, but the goverment claimed it's all been cleaned up or something. Dunno, just an idea.

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Haha, awesome. I had an idea kinda like that in the shower a few days ago, about giant bugs that took over half a city and destroyed it. Then a team of exterminators are sent in to the wrecked city save people or something. It was basically just Escape from New York with bugs, though. mini/tongue

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I have only just started brickfilming, but have been thinking of ideas for ages, here are a few:

Unaccuracy - A short brickfilm revolving around my two main characters John Sage and Alex Tanner. John buys a gun and mistakingly lets Alex look at it.

Brickworth - An action comedy about a hoplessly stupid detective John Brickworth who gets put on a murder case of someone in his precinct.

The Gem - A brickfilm about two theives Steve and Max who steal a priceless gem and hide it in a shopping bag, only to lose it and spend weeks on end trying to get it back.

Infection - A hopefully longer brickfilm about a viral zombie outbreak in Lego City. It will revolve mainly around John, Alex and their friends trying to escape before the city is overrun, but will feature cameo appearances from John Brickworth and Steve and Max.

The Break In - Whilst John is at a gun convention out of town, Alex is left in charge of the apartment. When it gets robbed by Steve and Max, Alex tries to prevent it from happening again, with drastic consequences!

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Those are all pretty cliché IMO.

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Ya know what's cliche?

A film about a bisexual fashion model which takes place in the 80s, but he also kills men he is attracted to and forces his girlfriends to watch. <--- Oh wait, that's my latest idea.

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Hey everyone well first of all i would like to acknoledge everyone who use to post some amazing lego movies on brickfest must say for all the old school watchers of lego stop motion i dont no if you guys remember the lego stop motion movie the lego clan uncut? Anyways if u guys havent seen it i have to say its one one of my personal favorites but i havent really kept up to date with the recent work of new and experienced stopmotion animators. Besides what i have just said this part of the forum is for idea and scripts. Me personally i wanna make one based on a guy i wanna name him ponyboy ned its about a young boy whos family died when he was young he managed to escape the scene but it was a burden he had scarred for the rest of his life he then became an outlaw living life without rules the boss? He was the boss he travelled many lands in search of a gang known as the fistnuggets there clan consisted of well over 30 gang members most of being amateurs but there leader known a cake dumus was a skilled swordsmen in fact he was known as the legend of all swords but even though ponyboy ned was aware of this he did not mind this was about revenge not skill anyhow ponyboy ned learned to master swords, axes, maces, flails, spears, bows preety much any common battle weapon he probably would have definetly mastered it was all his dad that trained him to be wat he is today. His father to him was more than a hero more than a legend words could not explain how much he loved he father he mother God have mercy on her soul was always a very stressed out woman she drank alot and she always put her husband down but neds father george loved her so very much he respected her he never layed a hand on her. Neds family was his life without them ned now lives life on the edge anyhow along the way he befriends someone who reminded him alot of his father this young fellow is known as pepsi, pepsi may seem like the rough bloke at first but pepsi will become a big part of neds life i plan on making many parts to this journey ponyboy ned will experience he will go throughout many amazing journeys that will make you feel like you are in it this was my original name my name is addrian but i call myself generalned thanks guys feedback or nice comments always appreciated.  (c) copyright protected generalned 2011 (c)

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What was that?

seriously; use proper punctuation and spelling and grammer. AND USE PROPER PARAGRAPHS!

MATT

PS: me film is going well. I have about 15 pages\90=1\6 DONE written.

13:58    BertL    you mean in high school people don't spontaneously break into song and dance

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The english language just died.

"Now you're just being cute. I CAN'T GO TO PIGFARTS. IT'S ON MAAARS, YOU NEEED A ROCKETSHIP. Do you have a rocketship, Potter? I bet you do. You know, not all of us inherited enough money to buy out NASA when our parents died; Look at this. Rocketship Potter. Starkid Potter. Moooonshoes Potter. TRAVERSING THE GALAXY FOR INTERGALATIC TRAVELS TO PIGFARTS." Draco Malfoy

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There are nicer ways to put that, guys. Be nice.
Anyway, I like the idea. Reminds me a bit of Zorro. I'd like to see it made, and the idea of having it made in parts is cool. Makes it more of a 'journey'.

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Danimation wrote:

There are nicer ways to put that, guys. Be nice.

I second that comment. And it is a mighty fine story. Though please, and I'll say it in a nice way so as not to be a hypocrite, check your spelling/grammar etc. It was very difficult to read.

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Thankyou very much for your comments friends i do apologise if my grammar was hard to read and i always appreciate feedback thxc for stickin up for me to i appreciate that anyway i was using my phone when i was writing my story as my computer will be down for a few days never the less i do plan on working on that script and a couple others i have in mind as well. Here are some of my other titles i have in mind if you like one of the titles please let me know and i'll happily share you the story if not thankyou anyways just allow me to know what comes to your head when you read the titles thanks.:)
¤The trip we'd never forget. (Every story has a start the ending well the ending is how you decide its gonna be, right?)
¤Cold blooded killer. (From a normal casual office executive to a former cold blooded killer but why?)
¤Deep in the woods. (A camper stakes, a female plates and a killer waits as hunter preys..)
¤Court's coming, times running. (A story of a young teenager gets in trouble with the law when he had broken up with ex demented girlfriend who went crazy and made a report to the police he had assaulted her just as his life was gonna have a fresh start looks like its gonna be a extra ending to it.)
¤Valentines Death. (every valentines i arrive every valentines i collect peoples souls.)
¤Rogue's Creek. (Down town off stoney creek leads a path to the county we now call Rogues Creek all we know is whoever enters never returns.)
¤Computer's are invented. (I am proud to pronounce the age of technology is here!)
¤Epic FAIL. (A man with no future ahead of him we call him epic fail.)
¤Runescape. (Runescape remade in lego i look forward to this!)
¤Wilderness Bait. (A man is trapped in a wilderness after a fatal airplane crash that killed his pilot and his wife stranded on an island soon for him to only relise he is bait to a sick lego.)
¤Outback mountain (A mountain named by legends this mountain is said to have hidden artifacts grossing over $320Million dollars worth of things.)
¤Flick pop and drop (In a land were crime is common there are 3 words we like to use on our victims, flick pop and drop.)
¤Polp Fiction (Fame, drugs, scandel a lustful story to be.)
¤blowd (A story of a man who was nothing to one of the worlds greatest drug lords ever.)
¤Life how we knew it (A man struggles of the past, a mother seeks answers and a son trying to survive each day.)

Thanks guys thats all i got atm. Any questions or feedbacks on some other ideas or you wanna know the full story of one of the titles above ill be happy to write it all down for you thanks everyone again!!!

Addrian N 
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Wow, your full of ideas, there seems to be some interesting ones there. I'd like to here more about Valentine's Death, although it does seem a bit unoriginal.

"Now you're just being cute. I CAN'T GO TO PIGFARTS. IT'S ON MAAARS, YOU NEEED A ROCKETSHIP. Do you have a rocketship, Potter? I bet you do. You know, not all of us inherited enough money to buy out NASA when our parents died; Look at this. Rocketship Potter. Starkid Potter. Moooonshoes Potter. TRAVERSING THE GALAXY FOR INTERGALATIC TRAVELS TO PIGFARTS." Draco Malfoy

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Also, great titles. I especially like 'Court's Coming, Time's Running'.

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You have alot of very basic ideas, you should turn one of them in an actual screenplay. I like Valentines death.

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WOW. Very impressive, that's quite an archive. Your spelling is a lot better too mini/wink  There's a lot of good, albeit simple, stories here. I, too, like Valentine's Death, and Blowd sounds interesting.

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