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Some WWII MOCs I'm using in an upcoming Brickfilm

Sherman Tank
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3083/3245992240_0a741a866b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3255/3245164853_abc00f95ba.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3107/3245165719_3b6d8a13c5.jpg
I built this in an afternoon. It's not the most perfect rendition of a Sherman, but I'm quite proud of it...any suggestions for improvement?

Recon Jeep
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3536/3245990674_5552853233.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3347/3245990970_e062575ae3.jpg
Built using a photo of a model built by Brickshelf user Kaitimar. I think it came out pretty darn good.

Medic Bike
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3117/3245163233_5d525d639b.jpg
Nothing fancy, just an Indiana Jones sidecar motorbike with a windshield added...pity the motorcycle is modern in design. ;P

So, yeah, hope you enjoy 'em!

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that tank is awesome.

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t256/darkman13forever/sign.png
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Danimation's Website

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They're all awesome. You, sir, are a genius. Now just get a good white expanse. mini/tongue

https://i.imgur.com/1JxY79v.png

Hazzat's Website

  • Location: Melbourne, Australia
  • Joined: January 8, 2009

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Haha, I built that Jeep as well (from the guys brickshelf), almost identical to your one!

Yechi Hamelech!

Maron's Website

  • Location: England
  • Joined: December 27, 2008

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My first go at some plasticine guitars I'm going to use in my next film.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/nomfee/Legomen/first_go_at_guitars.jpg

I think their alright. My favourite is the one on the left, I'm going to try to improve it , though.

-Brain Wave

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/nomfee/Lego/fjpb_poster_.png
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Watch the Doyle's Marrillion music film. Those guitars are awesome.
(I bet you already saw it mini/tongue)

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They're OK. Pretty nice looking. As T.G-Tom said, make it more like the Doyle bros' guitars mini/sunnies.

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Splash's Website

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they are good for a first try but i have nothing else to say that they have got ^^

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Here is a creation I made last night. I spent about 1-2 hours on it, it's kind of like the rock raiders. Lots of images:
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq201/Nellysplash/Rockraidercreation001.jpg?t=1233689883
Drivers:
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq201/Nellysplash/Rockraidercreation002.jpg?t=1233689949
Front:
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq201/Nellysplash/Rockraidercreation005.jpg?t=1233689972
Back:
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq201/Nellysplash/Rockraidercreation006.jpg?t=1233689996
Top:
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq201/Nellysplash/Rockraidercreation004.jpg?t=1233690021
Side:
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq201/Nellysplash/Rockraidercreation003.jpg?t=1233690061
Feedback Please. mini/smile

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Splash's Website

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awesome!

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I don't mean to sound harsh, but I think it looks rather boring. Try choosing a colour theme (eg, yellow and grey) and keeping it throughout the entire model. I'd also recommend adding heaps of tiny pieces around it, to make it look like a more complicated machine. The back could use some work too, as far as shaping and such goes.

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  • Location: London
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not  bad.But need some work

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pizzaboy's Website

  • Location: Slovenia
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A 5-wide white car:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3488/3260444700_212dccaaa6.jpg

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Yanzl's Website

  • Location: QLD, Australia
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Incredible, as per usual. i love the use of cheese slopes.

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Thats' great!
I would love to see that in a ganster film as a getaway car.
D.J.M.

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Another car:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3480/3263725306_b188e036a9.jpg

Yanzl's Website

  • Location: London
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^ That car is gangsta mini/wink

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pizzaboy's Website

  • Joined: December 27, 2008

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Awsome car!

  • Joined: December 27, 2008

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Valentines themed Scene, sorry the angle isn't very good i was having camera issues, if you can't tell it's that a few men are all standing in a line at a door to give a woman flowers on Valentines day.
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/191/3263545635_093ee560f9.jpg?v=0
You will Probably like this one:
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/250/3263548387_78f55de004.jpg?v=0

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3-4 POSTS.

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