Topic: The God's Given Hero (Working Title) - TOY Project

As you are all probably aware, the BiM 2011 contest, TOY (Tales of Yore) is now underway. And people are already planning entries, including myself. I had an idea come to me fairly quickly, however it's still left with many holes in the story. So, I devised this thread to basically get some suggestions as to what should happen in places, and to update and post various updates and some clips (For self-promotion purposes of course *Ahem*). Anyways, so here's the bare story outline.

A mysterious evil force has been causing uproar and death. Monsters are starting to invade villages, but for reasons un-known. The Gods decide that they have to take action and so create a warrior with unworldly powers to find and slay the beast which is cause for this devastation. The source is located in Egypt, and Pythos (Not yet confirmed), the hero, must take an epic voyage to conquer the evil, while saving half a dozen towns from ferocious creatures.

Enjoy! Sharing your friendly comments and critiques would be most appreciated. I'll post an update when more work has been done. Thanks for reading and good luck if you're entering TOY.

'look like it was shot at 2 FPS by a blindfolded five year old boy with broken fingers and no thumbs.' -PushOver
I'll be back animating soon! Exams and computer faults are keeping me away </3

Drifter (THAC 11) - Here

Re: The God's Given Hero (Working Title) - TOY Project

Well, you could start by moving your apostrophe, so that the title reads "The Gods' Given Hero" mini/wink
Otherwise, it implies a singular god, instead of multiple.

Re: The God's Given Hero (Working Title) - TOY Project

Thank you for that grammatical correction, any critique on the story? It sounds cliche, I am aware, however I hope to put in various twists. By the way, I would hope to have you as a voice actor as one of the Gods (You sound Godly), would that work for you? Ta.

'look like it was shot at 2 FPS by a blindfolded five year old boy with broken fingers and no thumbs.' -PushOver
I'll be back animating soon! Exams and computer faults are keeping me away </3

Drifter (THAC 11) - Here

Re: The God's Given Hero (Working Title) - TOY Project

Well, the overall plot is kinda interesting, I think it'll come out nicely. Hope it'll be a success, LegO. mini/smile And also, I think the Gods should have a Darth Vader-esque voice.

Last edited by Thunderbolt (December 23, 2010 (05:30am))

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