Topic: [Release] Sandwich

I know some of you might have seen this already on my YouTube channel, but for those who haven't, check it out, it's a film I made in high school with some friends.

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Nice work.
You have a good sense of comedic timing.

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Haha! That was really enjoyable and nicely done. I loved the fight scene, the camera work was nice and the jumps and kicks and all were great. Real nice work!

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That's fantastic. An amazing short. However, I would have ended just after the second set of 'Black Looks' (as Homer would say) and cut to black, rather than a second fight scene.

All in all a brilliant film, very funny, and if I was a reviewer it'd get at least 12 and a half stars! mini/smile

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Ash wrote:

I would have ended just after the second set of 'Black Looks' (as Homer would say) and cut to black, rather than a second fight scene.
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It's funny you say that, cause I've been thinking for a long time that I should have ended it when the clerk put the sandwich back on the bench.

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Great film, the action sequences were very well choreographed! I think moving the camera closer to the action and jerking it about a bit would have given the fight a little more edge - but I guess with comedy you don't want the violence to be too intense.

Really cool film!

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LOL GREAT! I agree with Ash about the cut.

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Nice one! Fight scenes were pretty well choreographed, and like mentioned, the comedic timing and overall pacing was great.

Keep up the gosh-darn good work.

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I saw sandwich, and it was awesome. The first 20 times I tried to watch, it wouldn't go past one minute, so, that stunk.

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Cag11 wrote:

I saw sandwich, and it was awesome. The first 20 times I tried to watch, it wouldn't go past one minute, so, that stunk.

You do know that the last post was 2 years ago. mini/eek There is no need doing major bumps like that unless it is necessary.

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Thunderbolt wrote:

You do know that the last post was 2 years ago. mini/eek There is no need doing major bumps like that unless it is necessary.

You're allowed to bump threads if you're reviewing a film.
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I just love this film, and I cannot get enough of it!

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wow!