If the guy was working in a top secret factory, where someone accidentally dropped the item, the guy would take it.

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

I think that it would be a good idea if the world that your story was set a utopia/dystopia society, where everyone is the same and no-one steps out of line. When someone does commit such a crime (the character taking something off the production line), they think that they can hide from the officials, but not for long.

Then again, that's a complete ripoff of Nineteen Eighty-Four.

Last edited by Hazzat (January 12, 2009 (02:51pm))

yah your right pizza boy Cause I made it up While I was typing:lol: Yah but seriosly I am gonna think more, but not now, Im at School;)

To make this a little more original... how about the company's actually making something evil, like missiles that deliver biological weapons or something, but the parts are constructed separately so that none of the lower employees know what they're actually making? And then your character finds something that starts to clue him in on what's actually going on, and he has to uncover the truth about the company, while the company's trying to stop him any way they can.

This is a ripoff of a movie, too, but I can't think which one. Just an idea.

Okay, now that I have now thought it over, I shall now show you: The Story is about a man named Wayne Solotov, his father Allen Solotov, was an employee of Terrakonn Industries. After an electrical surge, Allen goes missing. Wayne takes the job, in order to take care of his family. Life is dull in the plant , until he hears strange noises and growls, from behind the wall (of course this is all happening where his father went missing), Startled he turns around, and blasts the wall, causing a small cave in, of the wall, He then finds the object, ( one of the lego orbs, a modern day pandora box) He opens it and.......

I like that. A more psychological approach.

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But wouldn't it be rather suspicious for this object to not be on the database?

Heres what I am thinking:

-FADE IN FROM BLACK TO TOP SECRET FACILITY- Day/Month/Year/Time and place Gets typed across the bottom left corner. <Ends showing outside of building> -CUT TO SCENE INSIDE BUILDING SHOWING ETHAN- *Ethan goes about his normal job* *Ethan checks 3 products getting ready for shipping* *Ethan comes by a test tube with something inside.* -TEST TUBE HAS A GREEN LIQUID INSIDE AND IS GLOWING- *Ethan quickly grabs the test tube and hides it in his lab coat* *Ethan Continues to Work untill lunch break* *Loud bell rings indicating Lunch hour* *Ethan quickly and casually walks out the door to his van* He starts his van and heads home. When he gets home he has his Android scan the test tube. Scan shows up: Test Tube* *Ethan pours the liquid into a peitry dish and has android scan again* *search completes. Results: An Edible Liquid.* Ethan says, "Edible eh? I wonder what it does..." *Ethan pours it back into the test tube and stares at it for a couple seconds. Ethan Drinks it.* -CUT TO OUTSIDE ETHANS HOUSE- *screams are heard from the house, Then Silence* End Scene 1

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