Topic: Need help with upcoming series...

So i'm making a brickfilm about a mercenary spec ops team, and i want you to help develop the characters...

I don't need any help on the script, because it is completely done...


Characters:
???-Codename "Duster" *Leader of the team and the main mastermind of the team. He's hard, stone-cold but he's a team player*
Jake Ryder-Codename "Blade" *The youngest guy on the team. He is specialized in stealth combat. He is sometimes reckless, but comes in handy*
???-Codename "Pharaoh" *His father was killed in action in a secret operation in Russia. He is specialized in Computer hacking and Sniping*

there will be more, but i'm gonna take a nap now...

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Re: Need help with upcoming series...

So wait you need help with what?

And if you'd like, I could help you with the script.

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Re: Need help with upcoming series...

He said the script is done. What kind of help do you need? Are you going to enter this in the Mercenary Contest?

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Re: Need help with upcoming series...

Ah yes, but I meant I still wouldn't mine overlooking it. Since I'm a somewhat seasoned script writer. mini/smile

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Re: Need help with upcoming series...

nah, the script is done, and i'm pretty proud of it.

I just need help with the team members. I need 5 members, but i can't come up with anything right now...

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Re: Need help with upcoming series...

Well, it's impressive that you've managed to write a script without defined characters.

Well, if you want to make a typical five-man band, you'll need your Hero to start with. He's charismatic or bold, or upstanding, driven, whatever - he wants to get stuff done. Next, there's "the Lancer", who is usually a reversal of the hero. If the hero is a clean-cut, uptight character, the lancer will be a rough, sarcastic guy. The third character is often the "smart guy", who tends to be physically weak, but extremely intelligent. Maybe a trickster. Number four is the Big Guy. He's tough and he can beat everyone up. Usually not too clever. And the last character in the five-man band is "The Chick". That doesn't have to be a woman, per se, it's just a character who provides the 'heart' for the group and keeps it all together.

For more about the "Five-Man Band" and all sorts of examples, check out the Tv Tropes page.

Of course, feel free to ignore these standard "clichés". They work for a reason, though.

Re: Need help with upcoming series...

yeah, i was trying to do a crew like that.

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