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Topic: (Script idea..) Confinement.

I'll probably change the title if I make it...



It will be about a world where everyone is monitored....

There is no crime, whatsoever...

Or so you think anyway.

The government has a way of erasing things from peoples minds so that nothing disrupts the peace.


When somebody dies, the body is disintergrated and all memory of them is erased.

It's done by devices installed in every building and street, scanners, and disintergraters.

But one man has a problem...

He has a heart attack, and the computer system deems him dead... It's just about to disintergrate him, when he revives.

It doesn't disintergrate him, but he gets erased from the memories of everyone he ever met.


He is suddenly a ghost, and even his family do not recognise him..

He vows to stop this way of life, and free the world from the oprression of the government...

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What do ya think?

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Re: (Script idea..) Confinement.

if done right, that could be an amazing film!

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Re: (Script idea..) Confinement.

It's definitely an interesting hook, though it may be a lot to try to pull off.

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I agree.  It sounds great!  It would take a bit of work but it's feasible.  I'd go for it!

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Gaaaaahh! I hate all of you BIM members! You're all able to come up with such original and brilliant ideas! I am never able to think of anything that great! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go cry on my bed about the fact that I've got no imagination at all.

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Hmm...

I have an ending idea, but it would spoil the film.

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jstudios wrote:

Gaaaaahh! I hate all of you BIM members! You're all able to come up with such original and brilliant ideas! I am never able to think of anything that great! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go cry on my bed about the fact that I've got no imagination at all.

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I could be a writer. Just sayin' mini/tongue

I have two projects on the works right now and not much to right, so I'd love to write a simple script for somebody. Good luck with the film Brickyman!

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Thanks for the feedback guys!

And Splash, I may take that offer. mini/tongue

I'll contact you when I decide.

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Seems good, reminds me a bit of Minority Report, but maybe that's just me.
I hope this idea falls in the right hands. The idea is brickfilm-worthy.
My only doubt is if you, Brickyman, have enough experience, talent, and tools to make this. I think it's a very complicated project if you really want to start it yourself. I'm not trying to offend you, i'm only trying you to realize that it's hard to make such a film. mini/smile

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I understand what you're saying Tom, but Brickyman knows what he wants. I'd be surprised but honored if he chose me to right for him, and I'd put lots of effort in. He just needs the encouragement from Bricks In Motion to make it good. That means support like people willnig to voice act, an audience looking forward to it, a composer (There you go, Tom mini/tongue ) so this has serious potential if brickyman gets the motivation for it.

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True, true, it's all true. mini/tongue


All I need is a new camera, and a lot of support. mini/XD

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Yes, honored, as you're making a following here mini/tongue

By the way, I was really bored, so I just conjured up this.

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It's nothing much, but if you like it it was easy, so I could do much better.

I'm involving myself too much, now. I think I better just quiet down a bit  .

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Lol...

Nice logo. mini/bigsmile


It seems like you're excited by this idea?


mini/XD I kinda owe it you to make it now. mini/cat

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Okay, I think I'm ready. I can start in about 2 days. I'll send you a first draft, you review and we'll both go over it. You'll need Skype because I need immediate response on this. If you have Skype tell me what it is. We can discuss and I can begin writing.

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Brickyman wrote:

I'll probably change the title if I make it...



It will be about a world where everyone is monitored....

There is no crime, whatsoever...

Or so you think anyway.

The government has a way of erasing things from peoples minds so that nothing disrupts the peace.


What do ya think?

I like this bit, I think that right there would make a fantastic futuristic totalitarian heist flick. The part you're more focused on is interesting too, but if that doesn't work out, keep this one in mind. You have a world that, if written the appropriate way, could be great.

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I don't have Skype...

But thanks for that.

I'll probably send you a very basic line of events, and characters, and I'll write the main plotline, but you can flesh it out. mini/smile

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Sweet. PM me it or E-Mail it to [email protected] and you need the underscores before and after "nellster". Preferably the latter, as I'd need your E-Mail address.

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Kinda reminds me about Inception, how they can go into your dreams and incept, I know this is a different concept.

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