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Topic: A Strange Game: A script by Tripod

A STRANGE GAME is a bit of a reboot to my series called DARK BOUNTY. I wanted to do a new short with the Dark Trigger character using the writing skills i've gained since the initial series, off canon. This is it, about 5 pages long, enjoy and (please) give feedback. I will be creating this in the weeks to come.

A STRANGE GAME (in PDF): http://www.mediafire.com/?iwj95k7o5i25smo

Last edited by Tripod (August 7, 2010 (10:00pm))

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Re: A Strange Game: A script by Tripod

allrite you go man.

Hi
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Re: A Strange Game: A script by Tripod

Great so see other members with a love for writing on the forum mini/smile
I must say I loved it and definately want to read more of this series. I wouldn't change a thing except for the name 'Dark Trigger', I would pick something with dark, just not trigger, don't know why.
Great work!

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Re: A Strange Game: A script by Tripod

This definately has some potential! I found myself picturing bits and pieces of the film, just from reading the script. As vik said, might wanna change the name of trigger. mini/wink just clunks a bit.

Other than that, SUPERB! Can't wait for the film.

My $0.02
~TB

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Re: A Strange Game: A script by Tripod

I appreciate the feedback. Although I'm not quite sure why the name doesn't work, seeing as the name is only in script descriptions and not in any of the dialogue, i'll let it slide for now.

Filming has started up (my first original in close to 2 years) so I'm excited to see how it turns out, myself!

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Re: A Strange Game: A script by Tripod

Yeah, I wasn't going to mention the name because it doesn't actually gets said in the script, but since it's a series I figured it probably would in another episode.

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