• Joined: July 15, 2010

Topic: My first script.

WELCOMING VIDEO: Bill and Phil.

B: (slides in) HEY THERE, I'm Bill!
P: (leans down from roof) And I'm Phil! (falls with an grunt on impact)
B: And we're going to be bringing you brickfilms of all different genres!
P: uuughhh...
B: I can't do this alone, Phil.
P: (grunts) (mumbling) genres such as horror, serious, and comedy...
B: You heard right! We- wait. Horror?
P: Just go with it. (gets up)
B: Okay... We're going to be main characters in these videos.
P: As well as other guests.
B: See you in another video! (slithers out like a snake)
P: Which will begin as soon as my headache is gone... (dizzily walks out)

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  • Joined: December 27, 2008

Re: My first script.

Interesting... Slapstick much?

Do tell me this: Do you plan on making a Phil & Bill Series? Or are they just gonna host your videos?

If you are making a "Dynamic Duo" type series I advise you be extremely creative so it stands out from the Dynamic Duos that everyone else does.

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"actuallly this involves spiderman too, not batman. but im also taking a new approach, more comedy, less action. i dont see to many movies like that with more comedy than action" --SteveStarfyTV on an Indiana Jones meets Star Wars idea.

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  • Joined: July 15, 2010

Re: My first script.

Mmm. Hadn't thought about that.

More than likely a Phil & Bill Series.

  • Location: On Your Shift Key
  • Joined: December 27, 2008

Re: My first script.

I suggest you watch plenty of Dynamic Duo films so you can know what clichés to avoid.

Why not take the suggestion: Make an SNL (Saturday Night Live if you haven't heard of it) type series where Phil and Bill introduce "skits"?

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"actuallly this involves spiderman too, not batman. but im also taking a new approach, more comedy, less action. i dont see to many movies like that with more comedy than action" --SteveStarfyTV on an Indiana Jones meets Star Wars idea.

fib12345's Website

  • Joined: July 15, 2010

Re: My first script.

Good idea! It's nice and original. I'll start writing one now.

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  • Joined: December 26, 2008

Re: My first script.

That could turn into a community project. Everyone makes a sketch, and sends it in to the director/producer.

  • Joined: July 15, 2010

Re: My first script.

Yeah, but I'd rather not be the producer. o_o

  • Location: Kildare, Ireland
  • Joined: July 29, 2010

Re: My first script.

Yeah that a great idea! I'd defiently send in a sketch!

"Now you're just being cute. I CAN'T GO TO PIGFARTS. IT'S ON MAAARS, YOU NEEED A ROCKETSHIP. Do you have a rocketship, Potter? I bet you do. You know, not all of us inherited enough money to buy out NASA when our parents died; Look at this. Rocketship Potter. Starkid Potter. Moooonshoes Potter. TRAVERSING THE GALAXY FOR INTERGALATIC TRAVELS TO PIGFARTS." Draco Malfoy
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  • Joined: July 16, 2010

Re: My first script.

Is the dynamic duo thing over-used? I was thinking of doing one.

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  • Joined: December 26, 2008

Re: My first script.

^ Yes. Don't.

With all due respect Noodle, I don't want you here. - Ratboy Productions